Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sea Of Pain

[BioRhythm]

I`m falling...
arms outstretched vainly seeking help.
seeing hope I yell out.
only at the last realizing its vanity,
realizing my hope
was only false dreams,
realizing my love
could never have been as real as it seemed.
And as I fall...
slowly being submerged by the sea..
my tears rain down upon me
liquid pain adding to my sea of tears.

By amar is life

 

[$$RICH$$]

A pain i know so well .........speak on let it all out !

 

[watzinaname]

I know that feeling, and you expressed it so well poet.

 

[1poetsought]

SEA OF PAIN, is an OUTSTANDING piece, Amar.

 

[Auroraflower]

i feel you....






yes unfortunalty its a part of life....






its always good to dream...

cause they come treu for those who believe...






but sumthimes ....





it all falls down...

in a moment ...




but keep dreaming ....and believing..




cause one day ..


youre dreams come treu....







just look at the sun..

(untill judgement day)



the sun comes up ...




everymorning....










LoveAuroraflower