Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sea Of Pain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BioRhythm, Jun 6, 2005.

  1. BioRhythm

    BioRhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I`m falling...
    arms outstretched vainly seeking help.
    seeing hope I yell out.
    only at the last realizing its vanity,
    realizing my hope
    was only false dreams,
    realizing my love
    could never have been as real as it seemed.
    And as I fall...
    slowly being submerged by the sea..
    my tears rain down upon me
    liquid pain adding to my sea of tears.

    By amar is life
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A pain i know so well .........speak on let it all out !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know that feeling, and you expressed it so well poet.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEA OF PAIN, is an OUTSTANDING piece, Amar.
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you.... :crying:






    yes unfortunalty its a part of life....






    its always good to dream...

    cause they come treu for those who believe...






    but sumthimes ....





    it all falls down...

    in a moment ...




    but keep dreaming ....and believing..




    cause one day ..


    youre dreams come treu....







    just look at the sun..

    (untill judgement day)



    the sun comes up ...




    everymorning....










    LoveAuroraflower:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    still in my head ............
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Master peace of wisdom
     
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