Quiet Poetry Lounge : SEA OF LOVE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Jun 13, 2006.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sight unseen, voices unheard, stimulating words.
    Penetrating my soul, making me want to unfold,
    The layers in YOUR mind, resemble MINE.
    My heart is deep like the blue sea
    Tired of the ships passing through the night.
    Causing my waves to become aggressive with fight.
    Sometimes the ships are not kind to me. I’d rather they just sail on
    And just let me be a calm beautiful sea.
    What would you do if you could find
    Love, Happiness, and a piece of mind.
    Unselfish and unconditional love, trust and honesty.
    I yearn for the love of a strong black man,
    Not afraid to let his heart be free.
    To love a woman so intimately.
    Allowing me to see how beautiful love truly can be.
    He would ravish my body through my mind.
    And fondle my heart with his eyes.
    The warmth of his body next to mine sends me to
    A special place that he has designed.
    Specifically for us to be. Never concerning our selves with time.
    Loving me passionately, tenderly, and erotic-ly
    My lover would see and feel the beauty that lives inside of me.
    That’s the part of me that you cannot just see
    With your naked eye.
    The part of me that is hidden deep, deep, within the sea.
    Does this love exist for me?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It exist indeed just above
    da deep blue sea
    where love comforts thee
    caress and tenderly
    devine & compassionately
    to take u into tyme
    by his love ultimate design
    dat's ravish like sunshine
    his love will feed u respect
    wit and sensual affect
    where da water & air has met
    he will stand as strong
    never lead ya heart wrong
    ya soul will never be alone
    he will speak in honesty
    eye will glaze affectionately
    ya sail will ride da tides
    calmly once ya love compromise
    unto his grace , he so live
    just look above forth his image
    and know i am that i am..........

     
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    im feeling this sea of love do ya thang poets.
     
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    Thank you Nevar.:)
     
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    $$RICH$$,

    That was absolutely,positively, no way I'm going to touch it Beautiful. I wonder if your poetry DNA can be cloned. You are so very talented. Thank you for that touching reply.:)
     
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    Beauty spreads from the trunk of da tree
    i'm just an lonely branch from it's existance.
    much luv
     
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    Yes, what so many seek, a genuine love just for them. This was a lovely piece, very sweet flow back from Rich.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz:
    Your words of kindness are greatly appreciated. You always say the sweetest things. Thanks a buch.
    Much Luv
     
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