Black Poetry : Scriptease

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by YeshuJah, Oct 2, 2001.

  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm 'bout to cleanse my mind of you,
    clear my head, catch me a clue-
    Done I am with the waiting & faking
    the constant debating.
    I've dwelt long on analysis,
    -now I escape the paralysis-
    of you and your intentions,
    good though they be-
    but I gots to live free
    not to mention,
    the sessions I done spent at the shrink
    tryin-a see through this stink,
    of-
    you and me,
    and how things should-a be.
    When will we exchange love for fuss,
    exchange you for just us?

    I'm laying up in this crib at night,
    arms empty, dick busting at the seams
    putting all my dreams on pause,
    wondering what's the cause/
    but its cool-
    I'm catching what I fished for
    got exactly what I wished for
    broke my own rules falling in love with you,
    was captivated right from the start
    took it to the max with you-
    never even bothering with the period of woo,
    but the biggest tree got an axe
    made for its demise-
    I guess this mindfukk is supposed to make me wise.
    Don't get me wrong,
    my love for you will always remain strong-
    but until you decide I'm your center
    I'm just doing time for the crime of wanting to be in love,
    passing up today for tomorrow-
    existing on promises empty & narrow/
    Let's love now, fukk tomorrow!
    Give me today the hell with forever!
    I need you,
    need you here and now-
    why can't we love like we used to
    and quit worrying about how?
    I miss going for walks with you,
    having midnight talks with you/
    laying on the beach totally feeling the vibe of you,
    but I guess you got your own vision
    and I ain't gonna stop you or get in your way,
    baby girl get your **** on-
    Check me back when you're all done,
    I just can't stand being one more planet in your orbit-
    I gots to be your SUN.
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brotha....make me wanna holla

    when I hear str8 up "word"!

    thank ya!


    a
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...Let's love now fukk tomorrow
    Give me today the hell with forever!"

    that said it all...tight work

    blak
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a way

    to finish it off...

    all or nuthin...and don't settle for anything in between...

    this was good...

    K
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all or nothing. no in between. no middle ground. no thinking about it.

    all or nothing.

    enough said YeshuJah.


    jh.
     
  6. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much thanks

    alyce, thank you for reading the verse. I appreciate your comments.

    blakverb, yeah. What good is anythingelse? Thanks for coming in on this.

    Kitana, glad you felt the finish and the verses in between. I thank you for reading and commenting on the verse.

    j'hiah,I hear ya- all or nothing. thanks for coming in on this.

    JAH Love to all.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dayummm

    str8 up on the real take me there again ....flow head on!;)
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jah....


    My Perfect-ly Poetic Brotha... :)

    ..this is one of those pieces you have to read
    2-3 tymes... not because you have to... but
    because you WANT TO... cause you can relate...
    you can dig it... you can feel it!

    thanks for sharin'

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~