Black Poetry : scribbled notes on a pad (I'm ready now)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hadassah, May 3, 2001.

  1. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    Lord, where in heaven are you?
    And if I was once a cherub in
    your courts, why would you
    send me here?

    I've heard so many stories
    about pre-existence
    pre-destination

    and I'm so confused

    Your Word says
    you're coming
    back for me..

    I'm ready now
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Mommy, can you hear me?

    If I was the love~child
    of your womb

    why couldn't you 'know'
    my heart would one
    day be opened

    completely consumed

    by love in it's entirety

    oh mother, I'm loving
    a man the way
    loving is meant to be

    timing is imperfect

    and our time is
    is not free

    but
    I'm ready NOW
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Daddy, my news is not so good ~

    and now I know you
    always 'knew'

    when I held your arm
    down that long aisle

    so many words our tears
    held back

    you saw my road
    but didn't discourage

    one thing you told me
    I still cling to

    I can always come back
    home to you

    I'm ready now

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    hadassah
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome and well done. I enjoyed the flow of this peace. That's what it brought to me peace.


    One
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hadassah

    Sis, continue to flow on your notepad
    all your thoughts and feelings
    and I'll be waiting to hear more...I'm ready:)

    Nice flow sis!!!
     
  4. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa

    can't even speak! HEAVY is all I can say!

    Scribe sis!

    CELA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UPON YA NOTE PAD YA INK FLOWS RIVER RED
    SPEAKETH MY CHILD FROM THE VOICE OF
    HEAVEN AND FROM YA HEART U R WELL FELT
    WRITE ON ! I'M LISTENING INTENTLY.
    FORTH IF IT WAS NOT SO HE WOULD HAVE TOLD U!
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Hadassah ... such a beautiful flow

    nice nice nice

    luv it!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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