Black Poetry : SCREAMMIN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Screammin for a love so real
    knowing what my heart now feels
    asking myself, is it just a thrill
    of these deep emotions of chills

    Screammin deep through this dream
    of a vision my soul now fin
    twistin my love in big crazy knots
    from this compassionate love i got

    Screammin this same ole tone
    my heart now sing & cling to a song
    like whispers in the dark
    i offered loyality you seen to not know
    i compromise my love you can't bare
    i compose my heart through many faze
    but fine my soul trap in this maze

    Screammin to protect my mystery
    yet open a love fearless & free
    from nowhere to tender care
    just screammin off a mandingo glist
    my heart beating the indingo bliss
    callin , wavin , seekin ya heart
    but it's trust at start of my tango

    Dancing into a crystal glist
    when our mentals blend & kiss
    taken waves of journies
    sometime i wanna clown
    yet i sit in comfort wit out a sound
    posing this face of frownz
    fighting off my inner taste
    to enter your secret place
    Scream'min beloveth please
    don't taketh my loveth of thee
    forth art my soul to you
    tell me what a man to do

    Scream'min day & night, night & day
    wishing you will, wishing you might
    come to understand my light
    as the flickered flames dance off this
    single candle my heart runs like a river
    my soul become cold as steel
    i look to heaven's for his will
    and find peace again & again
    beyond screammin as i close another chapter.


    A Dyamondluv 05 spill
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was amazingly wow awesome but that will never define your skillful art how you allow the reader to join you on your poetic trip...i am soul feeling this to my depths in which my spirit can scream and release a joyful noice
    this was smooth and relaxing and so mo yanno...now i know you know i want mo right.....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now you know i have more ! and u gonna get it .....
    Thank you Angel happy u saw what i saw in this
    creammin spill of love , stay tune for the upper room.
     
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    your welcome....upper room huh...naw yanno me right?
    flow it my Richie Rich....
     
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    thank u again for the support & love
    as the making is in progress..........
     
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    When we come to a realization of how we truly feel, sometimes we need a release. Feeling the scribe, flow on poet.
     
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    thankz watz indeed one whom release opens the gate of tomorrow.
     
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    Yes Yes I do believe you've started something wiht this one I hope pt2 is just as good although I know it will be.
     
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    most thankz sista soulful2006 happy u enjoyed it
     
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    My Dear Darling $$RICH$$NESSSSSSSS ... :love:

    Now you know i don't get up here, to the poetry forum, nearly as often as i should ... but someone ... a Member ... said to me ... Destee, is $$RICH$$ in love ???!!! ... :love: ... and i said, he aint told me about it!!!! And they said, go read that poem SCREAMMIN !!! ... and i said ... i surely will !!!! :)

    And they are right ... we need ta know about this flow !!!! :)

    My $$RICH$$NESSSS ... is there something you need to be telling us about ???!!! :)

    Nawwww ... i'm just kidding ... i know you have always written beautiful poetry just like this ... but i can see how it might have folk think'n stuff ... i mean ... ya know ??!! :)

    This is BEAUTIFUL $$RICH$$ !!! :toast:

    Thanks for Sharing!

    ... and a special thanks to the Member that guided me this way ... :wink:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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