Black Poetry : SCRAPPING

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SCRAPPING

    Must pause for unjust rap laws rather trust tiger paws //
    Powers of concentration flowers a whole nation and
    Blooms after fertilization must eradicate the dandelions
    First which are flaws //
    Lightning best describe my excitng archive it’s a biting beehive //
    With brassy tones the classy love jones are thrown in with the jive //
    Shown live like the pay per view, stay like a curfew on the street //
    Fought rigorous in a vigorous onslaught and caught up in a defeat //
    Sought to complete the battle, saddle the heat, straddle the unique //
    Paddle down a creek with hot ability not silly but spit well and deep //
    Abolish requirements polish retirements never rhyme irrelevant mind prevalent //
    To rap, elegant how I trunk the funk like an elephant but try to be benevolent //
    I travel sometimes fall on gravel cause abrasion but mind persuasion is my aim //
    Special occasion flame likes fire and tame with desire, keep abreast on my fame //
    I partake in rhymes with heartache many times brotherly energetic discovery accredited //
    To rap script, cats talk pathetic crap, verbally strap to spit flames cats dread it //
    I fed it to pigs and split wigs, fingerprints dust em, rhymes I bust em I’m accustom //
    To rip script, excellent piece of work rhymes never cease to perk so trust em //
    Endanger lives no stranger survives this battle, you’re a jerk true //
    It’s my virtue to alert you and hurt your crew you bad but I throw dirt too //
    Like a blind Rhinoceros cats rhyme preposterous I spit lime and phosphorus //
    A redundant lie somehow slaughter, I spit an abundant supply of water cautious //
    Order a Nubian Queen from the sista sistah magazine a conscious daughter //
    Cats of no use step with no excuse gets verbal abuse it’s a hangman noose //
    Tied won’t come a loose triangle the facts like an hypotenuse not even Bruce
    Lee could Kung fu on this kid

    MADDRAPPR PEACE
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You Know!

    WOw! YOu Know! That I'm always feelin yo rythmes! NOw MADD,that was badd! I don't know what to say! And you be writing for dayz! Still waiting for that cd. Maybe you and I could collab on dat one. Hee hee hee. You know I'm playin. Keep comin fresh with the new stuff. I'm inspired. That piece had a beautiful ending.
    Desert STorm
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madd...

    you said it yourself... ;)

    this is tyght... flow on poetic rapper... flow on!!

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YO GIRL DESERT AND GIRL SUNSHINE HAVING A GOOD TIME

    YO GIRL DESERT AND GIRL SUNSHINE HAVING A GOOD TIME THANKS A LOT DON'T KNOW HOW TO ACT RIGHT NOW GOT TWO RESPONSE YO GIRL SUNSHYNE HOW YOU GONNA GET 369 REVIEW AND 49 RESPONSES UNHEARD OF GIRL ANYWAY THANKS FOR PEEPING YALL
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i'm loving the growth of MADDRAPPER

    your material has a definiter more serious edge to it

    peace poet

    much respect

    DSS
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pickin' Up

    Be reading you for a while and this piece is starting to show some deeper you and I like it-- we all need fluff from time to time, but at other times we need reality and this is real--very nice--keep growing and keep writing--Amun-Ra

    :)