Black Poetry : Scrapbook Recollections

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you remember, really?
    Do you remember the first gentle breeze
    The precursor to indescribable moments
    like those and these?
    Do you remember?

    Do you recall that fall, when thoughts
    and pens were reintroduced to ink
    when magenta leaves drifted upon scrolls
    tempting parched quills to drink?

    Can you recapture that inkling that
    we've met on another plane?
    Knowing those thoughts have been exchanged
    before, we found ourselves at a loss to explain
    that familiarity

    Do you recollect when hands held
    began to caress and undress
    and hushed thoughts turned
    into reasons to confess
    Remember that?

    And what of those times
    when you lingered in between pauses
    of silence and misty mornings, and mere
    words failed to capture the causes
    for those feelings
    Those feelings that won't allow us to
    forget...
    Remember?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how can i forget and how i remember
    this was awesomely done to bring back memories to be recollect
    in the mist of this scrapbook note
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aint that Much :time: Inda world!!!!
    He betta remember!!!!
    :D
    This was a beautiful Words Watzinaname
    Keep Flow Sis.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, there are those memories that just tend to linger that way. Thank you Rich for your constant support.
    LOL @ you Platinum, how about that? Thank you sis for your kind response.
     
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    I love your sensual, elegant style of writing. I felt such a graceful, romantic vibe from this piece of art. I'm a fan! lol
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A fan of mine? Well gee, Phenomenon, coming from an artist such as yourself, I consider that to be quite a compliment, and I am humbled. Thank you so much.
     
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    Hi Sister watzinaname
    This is a wonderful poem that reflects the
    journey of the pen, I love the
    gentleness in your scribe and the effect
    it placeon the thoughts.
    Very soothing

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Hello there watz:
    The serenity of this piece had me floating.
    I really enjoy reading you. Your poems
    always leave me with such pleasant
    thoughts on my mind.


    Can you recapture that inkling that
    we've met on another plane?
    Knowing those thoughts have been exchanged
    before, we found ourselves at a loss to explain
    that familiarity



    Boy I can relate to that verse.

    Beautiful write my sista....

    Much Luv
     
  9. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very poetic

    your words ring of descriptive poetry. magenta leaves. you bring pictures to mind and draw images with your adjectives. nice write, sis.
     
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    Picture This...

    Watz, what well crafted poetry you create.

    And in such good taste :tongue3: