Black Poetry : Scowling Sister

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hanging out at the local First fridays
    where brothers have to be suited down just
    to "get down", which really doesn't make
    sense to me...but anyway

    While hanging out at First Fridays
    looking cool displaying my best "Ebony man" pose
    for all to see, I see a sister...

    she was a sack of dime pieces all rolled into
    one, I'll call her Dollar...
    well dollar walked and sashayed and swayed
    'til my eyes became motion sick

    she was dressed in what looked like a Vera Wang
    outfit linen sleeveless scooped cut in the front
    I don't why but her exposed cleavage caught my eye
    ;)

    so fine yet absent a smile. I
    the Suave brother that i am asked her
    "Yo' sis" why don't you smile
    she threw two daggers into my chest and one
    into the middle of my soul with a glare that
    was quite cold and she....walked off

    I noticed that she had a slight limp
    as she rounded the corner to the hallway
    I...the Concerned brother that i be
    followed her to see...if she was cool

    I caught her shoes off, rubbing her feet
    and I told her "vanity has it's price doesn't
    it" with a puzzled look she
    tried to toss another dagger but I was looking

    and ducked I didn't leave / my
    mission was not complete 'til I told her
    "those shoes are nice but now i know why you don't
    smile...cause those shoes, they hurtin' your
    dang feet!"

    (c)2001 blakverb "trippin'"
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know I ...

    am ROTFL :lol: LMAO....at this piece, right-right!!

    :wink: Thanks for rubbing my feet to ease the
    pain Blak...
    and, you know eventually-- I would stop frowning too!!

    :heart: me some YOU!
     
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    verb,

    man you sick :lol: this piece to tight and mad funny. i likes the visuals. you are right...we do think the same way...
     
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    Too Funny!!!

    I guess you showed her...so..what was her face expression actions she made when you told her dhat!!! Hilarious!!!:)
     
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    ha!

    u nailed that one head on!! lol

    and bruthas always wondering why we be looking so fierce half the time!

    beauty surely got a price
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB.....

    cute!... cute!... & cute!!...

    thank you for making me smile today! :)

    OneLuv...
    SunShyne~
     
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