Black Poetry : Scorpion Moon

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Scorpio,
    dark,
    mysterious,
    smooth
    and intense.
    Two faces to the moon;
    a simple
    equation.
    One face that you see +
    One side that you don't=
    complexities.
    The power
    over sea,
    from high tide
    to low ebbs.
    Secretive
    potent
    magnetic
    captivating and alluring.
    The sting of
    a Scorpion-glazed man
    or woman.
    Intellect
    and taste,
    style and grace.
    The sweet smell of
    a scorpion induced personality.
    Touch me in
    the morning early
    and swim in my
    dark and sultry
    sea.
    Seeing in sweet gloom,
    I drink in the
    power of a
    Scorpion Moon.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wyne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
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    I enjoy reading this flow
    of the Scorpio
    truly wonderful how you
    focus the vibe moods
    of the Scorpio Moon
    feeling the vibe indeed
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl thank you so much for your beautiful love! God bless you.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    This floE was indeed off the chain, very nice floE'n :bowdown:
    Much Love
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    Smooth and enticing in your flow, you cause me to wonder in astrological terms.
     
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    SMOOTH FEELIN YA VIBE
    FLOW ON
    PEACE
    ANGEL
     
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    yyyyyieeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh boeeeyyyy!!!!!!!!!!rep dat scorpio brotha...i enjoyed this...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Intoxicating.
    Your flow is smooth and I like it.
    You Flow.
     
  9. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All of you are blessings to me in the greatest of ways. Thank you and God bless.
     
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    this is definitely a nice peace.
    basic stucture and wording but strong
    and emotion was felt.

    ^ very nice part of the piece.
    it just jumped out at me.
    i had to say somethin about it.
    nice metaphor even if you wrote it not to be one.
    says alot.
    nice work.

    WuN...
     
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