Quiet Poetry Lounge : Scibe to stay alive

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Apr 28, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Death to life
    blank page
    full pen

    Death to life
    the strength
    to write again

    Death to life
    recycled words
    to bring meaning

    Death to life
    Weathered storm
    See the sun-rays beaming

    A scribe must write
    to bring
    Death to life

    For my inks pen
    never rests

    But

    to write
    Death to life

    One must feel
    Life's
    Conciousness

    Oh my achy

    hand..
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So much to write about, so little time, yet when have that urge to write, we somehow make the time to put life's pulse on paper. Feeling this write poetess.
     
  3. GeorgeM

    GeorgeM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *APPLAUSE*

    I really liked the rhythm of this piece...so few words yet so much to say.....I enjoyed the hell out of this short scribe....thanks for sharing....



    poetic respect




    peace and blessings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe here poet
     
  5. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    thank you Sister Watz and Brother Rich.....

    thank you brother GeorgeM... glad u enjoy'd it... :)
     
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    I like this remix of reincarnation. You might want to put some Bengay on that hand sista cause you ain't retired yet! I think those beautiful hands still got to touch the paper with the art from your lips and creative mind!
     
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    :)

    you just made my day!

    I think I'll write till my hand falls off...

    and then I'll use the other one...

    thank you so much for the love....

    and it's bounces off me and heads right back at ya!!!

    peace.
     
  8. Ionlyspeaktruth

    Ionlyspeaktruth Banned

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    You have some skills my friend.
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved it poet!
     
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    *NODS AND APPLAUSE*

    I like :)
     
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