Black Poetry : School of A'freakin Transcendence

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepgrrl, Apr 15, 2002.

  1. deepgrrl

    deepgrrl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My style heretofore has been to make ‘em holla
    While keeping my objective erotic distance
    I was the sensual svengali
    da buhddist with butt
    the guru with goo
    Star and Director of this schizo-cerebral skinflick
    Lights, camera, and "i'm ready for my close up, Mr. FillintheBlank"
    Rock dat booty and roll on tha’ One!
    Ready to ooh and coo in all the right places
    To ooh and ahhhhh….. oh but always searching for the Big OMMMMMMM……
    (white chicks, learn how! In this month’s issue of Karmic Cosmo!)

    I was questing
    struggling to reach that moment of sacred sexual surrender
    That place-nonplace
    where I am inside myself and outside myself at once
    Where in twin consciousness I am my own mirror-image,
    And the goddess in me smiles her crooked smile.
    While on a purely physiological tip
    My luv flows down like honey,
    And my synapses are popping like a hot comb on wet naps.
    Reduced to pure Mind and pure Musk……oh baby can ya smell me?

    Ah, but there’s the rub!
    Cuz I never was rubbed quite good enough
    nor in any of the right places.
    They always missed those nooks and crannies
    that held my melted butter,
    Buzzed plenty around the hive but
    never made the nectar drip from my comb.
    I’d done ivory stumps to ebony spears,
    And even explored a shrub or two (licky licky).
    But I never could get it quite right.
    Quite right as in right there
    right there baby right there sweet daddy, right there right there
    RIGHT THERE G_DDAMMIT! Righ…OMMMMMMMMMMM……
    (and Elvis has left the building.)
    An’ then an’ then an’ then
    when the student is ready the teacher will cum.....

    Lesson 1: Vocabulary
    Fusion: the act or procedure of liquefying by heat.
    As in:
    Is that a school bell I hear my dark Sensei?
    Or just the sound of this throbbin fusion
    u ignited between my thighs.
     
  2. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, dat was off the chain and I can write a book about just how off the chain it was so trust me when I say I would if I had the time. You MY choice for the Poet of the Week...
     
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    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deepgrrl, you are there...i mean all the way.
    i bow my head to the strength of this masterpiece...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    deepgrrl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to both of you! I'm humbled that you liked this piece. It's a work in progress, so we'll see where the journey takes me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again u have rip a masterful flow on da real !!
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooooooooweeeeeee!!

    Very tyte scribe Poet!! I diggin it fo sho!!;)
     
  7. deepgrrl

    deepgrrl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rashad. I've been vibin' on your stuff as well. Love your spiritual grounding and imagery!

    And Rich, been checkin' out your spoken words. Nicety!
     
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