Black Poetry : Scenarios

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im wrestling with tigers and bears,
    And my knees all dirty, kind of hard to stand,
    And The reason my soul starts to ache,
    Harder than heartaches stuff my face with eli's cheesecake,
    Stuff my pockets with something for goodness sake,
    Hey

    My attention to my soul is like a platinum herringbone,
    Tied in knotts and locked down like fort knocks,
    Rolled on block with Vicelords, thugs and 2pacs-Yeah
    Its killing me I see this world so vividly,
    Touch the devils hands twice and still aint got rid of me,
    Hey

    Committed with a gift yet im so stress related,
    Bankruptcy and so many babies, im so shady,
    Gurl its all gravy F-You pay me,
    Estranged relationships just drive me crazy
    I can be single dont need no lady
    Beat woman like ike but I aint crazy
    I we-We I see the valley and the shadow of death
    I took my chances cause theres nothing left,but
    Hey

    We all make our bed and lay in our sins,
    Pimps pimping woman,woman taking tricks,
    Tricks getting Std's,Std's to the woman at home,
    That cooks and cleans and does everything,
    So why do I do what I do too see what I do turn into the hell that I drew,Yes
    Thats a mouth full...
    But I have to think about the negative,
    To bring reliefs to my positives,
    Maximize my potentials cause my death is written,
    Hey

    Whats your scenario's????
     
  2. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol.. almost! id say grammer lessons r due!
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im going to come after you-lol
    I know you will teach me though
    Thank You Still Sis
     
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    Nice!! !
     
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    "Hey"... sweet. Travel from hyde Park to Avalon Park every day. That's the extent of my travels through your city. Still the same world.

    This one makes me question having sold my mpc. Head still noddin
     
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    my scenario is this
    our people getting high off this

    the new *****
    marijuana used to the be the thang now crack is the switch

    i've seen so many fine people turn in to waste
    just because the weed couldnt do it anymore and they had to get a taste

    and now were stuck with new subdivisions without family inside
    people changing their suvs to little rides

    gas prices pushing people to carpool
    soon as 3 dollars a gallon hit where i from they will get to acting the fool

    mama's tricking because the lights are off
    the only one's that are sustaining are the boss

    police riding the youth saying what you got
    i heard the stuff you have is hot

    all along is an undercover
    and to hear the words you have the right to remain silent and you discover

    that the po-po
    is now upon your door

    and mama got to hear about your stupidity
    son thinking mama wont forgive me

    found a body in the path
    taken by a disease and the disease took its wrath

    upon a kind hearted soul
    and the body had took its toll

    and somewhere is a kid wishing upon a star
    because he's poor and he wants to get far

    so that the family wont have to be without
    and praying to the lord to remove this heavy cloud

    so tant you ask and this is it
    you have so many S.C.E.N.A.R.I.O.U.S in so many skits

    Coming where Im from............
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte write bruh !
     
  8. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DANG MY BRATHA I WAZ FEELIN DIS
    U SAID SUM DEEP WORDS IN HURR DAT REALLY COUGHT MY EYEZ
    SO FLO ON WIT TRUTHZ


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    We receive a slice of others' lives as we journey through our own. Well done scribe capturing the scenerios in your view.
     
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    That was very nice Tantrum.
    U had me capitvated by yr every word.
     
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