Black Poetry : Scenario Tyme...Attention all Poets!!!

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To all who helped to honor our Queen Destee in Tribute I thank you...It meant much to her...Now here's your mission...let's have some fun with this one........Scribe a piece based on one of the following....

    Trifling men
    Gold digging women
    black on black crime
    state of the world today
    someone who owes you 100 bucks and seems to forget they owe you...


    your choice...remember post your piece in this thread.

    So speaketh the Bishop
     
  2. krazelyricks

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    She a gold digging woman
    If she let's anyone inject her with semen
    Steals his money and leaves in the middle of the night
    Come back the next day apologizing and saying things a'ight

    She's a gold digging woman
    If she takes his credit cards on shopping sprees because she can
    Ride around in his car with another man
    And does it with everyone in the blues band

    She's a gold diggin woman if she is fake
    Showing everyone from LA to ATL she can shake and bake
    If you put 5000 dollars in your account
    And now zero is the amount

    Sh'e a gold diggin' woman
    If she fakes coming
    And in the middle of sex ask you for twenty
    Loving ain't easy but she has stole so plenty

    She's a gold digging woman
    If when you ask her for somethin
    And she turns you down
    However asking for a Gucci purse this turns things around

    She's a gold digging woman if she
    Asks you where you be
    But never giving a direct answer for she
    And always doubling up the fee

    She's a gold digging woman
    If while you're snoring
    She with her girls at the club whoring
    And you at home tossing and turning

    She's a gold digging woman
    If she has done at least three out of these seven
    Dump her and explore a new haven
    Because that was not the soulmate God had in mind given

    Because she's a gold digging woman
    God's trying to tell you something
    Quit her before you get done in
    Find a more compatible human being
     
  3. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some quick stanzas...nothin serious :wink:
    Funny, I actually do have a friend who owes me 100. Thanks for the reminder. :)

    Hol up, hol up, hol up...
    You tellin me dis **** again!!!
    Do you even continue to call yourself a friend!!!
    One hundred dollars don't come easy
    But I guess it's easy being sleazy
    And if I had asked you for 100 dollars, it would be like a sin!!!

    You must don't know how much you've been putting me through.
    You must don't know just how much I trusted you.
    But 8 months
    With 100 bucks
    Might just make your colors true.

    Knowing I need them new shocks on my car.
    Knowing Winn Dixie don't pay more than 6.50 an hour.
    Knowing that I don't work but 20 hours a week.
    Knowing that I need that money to pedicure my feet!!!
    Knowing that if it was you it would be a whole nother story.
    But that's aiight cause unlike you I know my word makes me.

    But man, dat's aiight...you can keep dat young buck.
    But don't ask me for nothing cuz you gone be **** Outta Luck!!!

    :laugh:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop I think I'm gonna hit this one twice with something a lil more serious...
    This is too good a thread to pass up...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    i knew when you asked me
    i knew when you cried
    i knew when i did it
    i'd be kissin' it goodbye
    you always have a story
    always unemployed
    but i've been giving you two's and few's
    and now i'm simply annoyed
    cause i knew when you asked for $100
    that i'd never see it again
    but sometimes it's worth the pay off
    to keep you as a friend
    so now when i hear your stories
    about how broke you are
    they just roll over deaf ears
    and you cry your pissy broke tears
    you're always gonna be in arrears
    we can go near and far
    but just don't ask for anymore money
    no matter how broke you are

    BISHOP, why you got me on here actin' silly?
     
  6. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWESOME FLOW POETS!!! I know we got some more scribes that want to take advantage of this thread....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    c'mon family sho ya heart of flow in dis thread
    let da BISHOP feel da vibe of ya pen !!
    Poet's where are u ???
     
  8. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Weeping Mad

    :cry: sorry everybody, ya'll seem to be having fun, and this is probably too long, but....:censored:

    i remember back in '86
    when i was too young to be caught up in the mix
    didn't know no better, thought they were all my sisters and brothers
    but, dang who do you cry for when the one shoots the other? :bazooka:
    if you had asked me then, i'da said that was '70's blaxploitation trash
    but now i know better, since i left so many friend in the past
    too many to number, too many to name
    the few, the talented all got up in the game
    living the life of the pseudo gangsta, hood rat, thug :yo:
    thinking it's hot, or cool, or something to be able to claim a mugshot
    ya'll know what i'm talking about, i know you feeling me
    but just in case you ain't let me break it down for everybody to see

    had a cousin named endie and her best girl t
    sat chillin' in the front room, with the younguns'
    watching tv
    heard some kind of ruckus, down the street not that far
    thought that looked like dre sitting in missy's car
    all the sudden they look up, but before their eyes could comprehend
    3 shots rang out 2 for endie one for her friend :driveby:
    baby all covered in blood, trying to figure out what's wrong with moms
    "auntie auntie why you laying on the floor in potato chip crumbs?"
    15 years later, it's baby's graduation day
    but t can't be there all we can do is say,
    "baby, she'd be so proud you, i know"
    he looks at us with tears in is eyes and simply says "no,
    i can't remember her, i just know what ya'll said,
    but as far back as i remember, my mama's always been dead"
    and endie? i can't forget, she didn't quite die that day
    but her arms did, her legs did, even her dreams for a baby fell in
    them potato chip crumbs and that's where they stayed

    can i go a little further, take a little more time?
    i know i'm shedding the tears, but the sorrows not only mine
    i knew another sister, from creative writing class it seems
    first blush of womanhood, not even seventeen
    sister flowed like a river angie, maya, nikki, and sonya musta been in her genes
    and she dropped all our jaws when she stood up on the bus to sing
    seems she found a 'man' better yet i should call him a boy
    who whispered sweet nothings in her ear, and made her his toy
    but see he was mr. smooth, thugmaster extraordinaire
    running round telling folks, "i ain't never scared"
    brought some junk up from miami, that landed on his brother's doorstep :uzi:
    while everybody else in the house slumbered and slept
    he got sawed in half, for playing crazy and talking ****
    she found the drama just a little too much to even live with
    next time i get home from college i ask about her and guess what i hear?
    "girl ericka got shot, she caught beef with some girl last year,
    i heard she knifed her sister, cause she had johnny's child
    so they brought their crew up and girl they went wild!"

    i remember back in '86
    when i was too young to be caught up in the mix
    didn't know no better, thought they were all my sisters and brothers,
    but do you ever stop crying when they keep shooting each other?
    if you'd asked me then, i'da said that was '70's blaxploitation trash
    but now i know better since i keep leaving my people in the past
    :help:
     
  9. afrostotle

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    "BLACK ON BLACK CRIME"

    Gather round folks, as I start to tell
    A sad story of my living hell
    No particular place, person or time
    Like the sands of the hour glass,
    so are the days of those lives
    that are often cut short by
    Black on Black crime

    Many are called
    But the survivors are few
    I’m a Black king, nappy hair
    And all, short or tall
    I’m just like you
    So why did you kill
    The one who feels your pain
    When infact, black, underneath my
    Shirt and tie, I’m a ****** to them
    just the same
    If I had a dime, to you I’d spare it
    Instead, you chose to not give me a chance
    To break bread, nor a chance to plead my case
    So now I’m laying here dead
    Mouth wide open,
    pupils disappear, as they roll back in my head
    And to what do I owe this displeasure?
    You see, the reality is; ghetto times
    calls for ghetto measures, and
    believe you me,
    we brothas and sistas be living
    in some serious ghetto times
    if we don’t get each other’s back, and
    each one teach one, cause we all black,
    and keep losing kings and queens before their prime
    the fight will be over
    AND THE WINNER IS…….. BLACK ON BLACK CRIME
     
  10. $$RICH$$

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    join in poet express your self !
     
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