Black Poetry : Scattered Feelings

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  1. SuperFly

    SuperFly New Member MEMBER

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    {I wrote this poem for my boyfriend tell what you think.hope you enjoy }

    Scattered feelings

    I have these feelings inside of Me about You.
    I want to tell you But... I just don't know how.
    The feelings that i have for you are not meant to be kept inside but.. the can't find a way out.
    I want to know what's inside of You, so you can know whats inside of Me.
    Not to say that your not faithful, but...i must admit i have had doubts.
    When you don't say how you feel, you make me wonder.
    I don't know if is love or just a phase, but...whatever it is i'm just not ready for it to end.
    They always say you have to kiss alot of frogs until you find your prince charming, well now that ive found you does this mean that we'll live happy til the end?
    I don't know how to tell or show you how i feel. All i know is that i do and until i find out how u feel i will always have these SCATTERED FEELINGS inside of me
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    (c) 2005
    written by: superfly
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling waiting to be released
    sound like love ......................tyte drop
     
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    The feelings may be scattered, but lyrically the words are crystal clear. Enjoyed this flow.
     
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