Black Poetry : ~~~Scatin' Black~~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmm
    Smokey Jazz Cafe,
    candle lights and sweet incense
    floating in the air.
    Bask in the ambience of
    earth tones and
    mundane hues.
    Gather insight and creativity
    from musical clues.

    Me...

    One black diamond, scatin' black...
    waxin' floetically on black, jazzy riffs...
    everybody loves my dark rhymes.
    Listen to my bip
    coupled with a bop;
    Shweedle dee dee,
    shooby doo doo i'm to hot to trot.

    See,
    The potency is to much to understand,
    the imagery, to strong to see.
    I'm scatin' black to material instrumental's strivin' to make a connection with some part of your inner mental.

    I'm tappin' my feet to the swell of the primal beat,
    my own brand of black-dipped jazz.
    Its not for you to physically understand,
    in fact when you look and listen to me, don't
    expect to view or hear a man;
    rather I become sound, thought and imagery in one.
    From the mouth of my soul flows
    an un-readable, un-wordable scat with deep
    conviction.

    Scatin' black is my form of expression,
    the pouring of my essence into the natural.
    I don't think you catchin' this, ****! Come on y'all!
    I'm groovin' to some mad juicy funk.
    dweedle dee bahdop soodoot doot
    shooo,
    I love droppin' a little suga in everyone's stank with the intent of only enlightening you.

    Clad in black and silver from head to toe,
    not arrogant, just upscale and my soul?
    The proverbial poetic ***.
    Understand, I gotta peddle and spread my goods across this space and time.
    I gotta work the 'street corner' bringing my own vibe and special shine to peeps in danger of dyin'

    Scatin' black to my own flavor, my own exotic sense.
    Scatin' smoothly and creatively to destroy common place ignorance.
    Scatin' black aint nothin' but an idea, a philosophy...in essence the very description of you; the description of me.

    I gotta do what I do whether you dig or
    dislike my groove.
    It may not be your bag, but i'm sportin' it big doc.
    I gotta do what makes me happy...
    you know, embrace my individuality; and
    riff all my days to a special kind of jazz.

    One black diamond, scatin' black;
    waxin' floetically boo dee, boo dee
    boo dee, shoodoop dass.
    This black kat is scatin' black with intentions of creating something new and making it last.

    2004
    PropheticNsyght
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a beautiful piece of art wow !

    do post your link in the website forum it's not allowed in poetry
    can you remove it and post it in there and in BOOKS - WRITING - DISCUSSION forum ?

    Thankz
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice script you're capable of writing a book (but let me drop this)

    Stranded in the middle of a speech, fiddle to reach for grammar
    Verse friction not merry so pass the dictionary need glamour

    Face streaks of mud when I speak at clubs just can’t hammer

    A microphone, my flow tuff and mean like the gulf stream

    Drown cats with clown stats, felt strange face enough steam

    need help to rearrange my esteen
     
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    You really brought this to life and took me there! Great drop.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was able to move the address papi.
    Its good to hear from you and I thank you as always for your love and support. Merry Christmas.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pa, Merry Christmas and I thank you muchly for your support and love. Your flow was off the freakin' chain. Peace and Love
     
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    likewise happy u back in effect flowing miss ya pen u know
    most welcome poet
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You sure know how to make a grown man feel warm and cry! LOL Thank you again papi.
     
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    I could hear the finger snaps entwined with the scats in this vibe. This was beyond cool brotha poet. Bravo!!!!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for feeling my vibe. I appreciate your love. Much love to you mami.