Black Poetry : scars

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  1. trinitymatrix79

    trinitymatrix79 Member MEMBER

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    scars:

    I am standing still, watching the waves,
    I am holding my tears tears, but its all the same,
    I still feel the pain, and I still feel the rain,
    terrible emptiness tearing me inside,
    Horrible scars bleeding and not healing,
    Your essence trapped me from within,
    All my love I wanted to give,
    With all my heart I wanted to please,
    Someone who only knew to be selfish,
    Still I carried on loving,
    Still I carried on offering,
    My friendship as a delicacy,
    But like a soldier, u shot me without mercy,
    Once, twice... and I couldnt take it,
    what is left of me now is trying to survive,
    In the darkness of my soul, I´d rather stay alone,
    But I know that one day, you will come back to me,
    I will be bitter but I will smile,
    I will be hurt but I will laugh,
    But my heart you will never again have.


    tri
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl, when he comes back tell him to bounce...you don't need that kind of pain...that's the only way that you will truly heal...bounce, bounce, bounce! nice writing tho.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee poetry playground
    nice flow in ya vibe
    da pain u don't need as RED said let 'em bounceeeeeeeee!
    keep flowin'
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep flowin and throu the pain my sista..keep growin..nice flow
     
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