Black Poetry : scarred but still breathing

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    take it how u want it
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    daniel davis 2k4
    "tainted plat"



    Scarred but still breathin


    It’s ya boy

    The official spokes man

    Dog I got a broke hand
    It seems cat typing for me

    Rhetoric
    Get at me, can’t back me
    Detach me
    Arachnid is this
    My fist
    Stands for much more
    Much more, mi amor for the allure was four
    Times every rhyme I dropped was……….

    Tainted with the theory of man
    Some don’t understand my plan
    Just a man, so I sin,
    If platinum is beautiful which is holy
    I live on the blood of those who sold me

    Armies
    Not only exist in forts
    Regimens
    Thought was ready man
    But I lust for
    Someone to trust more
    An I’d bust for
    Someone to cuss for
    Why me, why us
    The beat of the drum is percuss

    Tainted with the theory of man
    Some don’t understand my plan
    Just a man, so I sin
    With the pain I face, how do I still grin
    Crack a smile for cracked pavements I fend for

    Forces against
    What I lent
    The credit rate I had was incredible
    But I forgot the history of hate was inevitable
    It’s the devil
    Who
    Stains
    The sword that glimmers
    Remember how it used to shine
    Shimmer…….

    In between the lines
    Anger resides
    On what I took pride
    My ride
    I died
    Trying to be reborn
    I feel scorned
    U did me like porn
    Broke my arm
    How can I scratch your back

    How can I scratch your back
    When u took my hands

    How………

    I’m angry
    I got so much anger inside
    It spills over on those I love
    I thought we, D was a family
    I thought I could come to u with love
    My thoughts
    My feelings
    U know
    But I guess
    I guess not

    Tha’s allright
    Cuz I’m comin
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said i feel ya keep moving
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

    Lots of depth , lots of heated emotion, but well put together piece.
    Poetry is a good place and way to vent ...but... :eek:
    Peace is a true healer!
    Blessings On Your House! :idea:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop...
    i likes this vibe...
    flow on Angel
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a prophet is often not welcomed by his own ...
    is the thought that comes to mind when I read this
    but the message must still be conveyed...

    so I'm glad your still coming...anger and all
    this was truly some passionate writing
    I enjoyed each part immensely!
     
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    Tight piece...

    I wholeheartedly agree with our sister angelic, when fam disagrees, it's painful, but U gotta keep it comin', do your thang.
     
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