Black Poetry : Scared Of Love

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  1. Astrologer4U

    Astrologer4U Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Patiently waiting for love
    The true feeling of recieving love, after giving love
    Love... Taking to long
    Impatiently tired of waiting for love
    Giving love
    Settling for what appears... To be love in return
    Appearances of love... One to many
    Question abounds
    Does love really exist?
    No true instances to confirm

    Falling... Fell... Into a cycle
    Appearances... Of returned love... Cycle
    It's hurting me
    Damaging me
    Oh I'm so tired, tired of living a lie
    Nothing about love, is as it appears to be
    Nothing... At all
    Pain

    Must take control, and stop letting appearances consume
    Must control what can be controlled
    My self, my actions
    No one but my self to blame
    Away, with appearances
    Got my wall up
    Staying away from what I feel, is un real
    Love

    Peeping over wall
    Possible illusions
    Wondering
    Is love real?
    Frightened by what I feel
    Subconscious "Stay behind wall"

    Frightened

    Afraid

    Horrified

    Ultimately...Scared...Of love
     
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    HEY ...

    A 4 U, THAT WAS SO TOUCHIN THAT I REALLY WANT TO SHED A TEAR OR TWO.. I KNOW, THIS IS ALOT OF WOMENS' STORY (MEN TOO) AND THAT'S WHAT MAKES IT SO REAL, SO UNDERSTOOD. I KNOW THIS IS VERY TOUCHING TO HEAR THIS VULNERABILITY TO COME FROM YOU AND WOW..... YOU KNOW I CONSIDER YOU TO BE A STRONG BLACK WOMAN, BUT I FORGOT, THAT YOU HAVE FEELINGS TOO AND THIS PIECE, I SEE AND I FEEL IT ALL... LOVE IS A BEAUTIFUL THING, DON'T BE SCARED JUST BE AWARE(WHICH I KNOW THAT YOU ARE). THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL PIECE, MY FRIEND INDEED.. I LOVE YOU:hearts1:
     
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    Ahh, thank you Free. I have been getting poked and prodded as to why I don't write some poetry or something to that affect so I just thought I would take a go at it. I have not done that in a long time but I think I am going to be taking some more cracks at it.


    Thank you for your words of encouragement Sis. You know I love you and you certainly give me love in return.



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    THE SAME THING HAPPENED TO ME WHEN I FIRST POSTED TO RICHS' LACE PANTIES POETRY THREAD.. LOL .. ONCE YOU START, IT JUST OPENS YOU UP, AND EXPRESSIN YOUR SELF, PENT UP FRUSTRATIONS AND THINGS THAT MAKE YOU HAPPY. NEXT, YOU GONNA POST AN ASTROLOGY POEM. HEY, THAT MIGHT BE INTERESTING;)
     
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    this was really sweetly felt great scribe sistah
     
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    As a matter a fact, I already have some Astrology short stories that I have written but I am going to save those for the book.:read:


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    Thank you Rich, that means a lot coming from you sweet heart. You are quite clever your self Gemini.


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    At times love pushes us to & fro...
    its scary, beautiful, hurtful, painful blissful, it runs the gambit
    of emotions, but in time...I'd get back in and do it again.

    coz when you experience it, it's so much worth it!

    Wonderful flow, Astro...



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    Thanks sister epiphany for your wonderful words of encouragment and thank you for the "wonderful flow" compliment.


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    Beautiful and heart felt

    I never peep over the wall I've built. Well, it aint just a wall now, I've built a fortress.

    Peace
     
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