Black Poetry : sayin i luv u...

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i luv u serenti

    he said he luv me
    oh God oh God
    what da hell am
    i gone do okay
    okay well yeah I
    live him you know
    like i like him a
    whole lot but not
    sure if i luv him
    so i live him
    like+love=live
    so newayz back
    to da problem
    what do i say
    to him? God
    he is so fine!
    why do his lips
    gotta be so juicy
    and full?
    why does his chest
    have to be so hard?
    why does his hair
    have to be so curly?
    and why da hell
    does he has to be
    so intelligent?!
    okay, okay. you
    caught me I'm not
    complaining.
    so what should
    i do?
    weeeeeelllllllllll he
    has met mama
    and even she
    approved, but
    I'm just 20 too, too
    young. okay
    maybe 21 but still
    young.
    AND he dd say I
    luv you first.
    AND he didin't even
    try to get with my
    gurl when i put her
    up to it
    AND he undastand
    da word no
    AND he's cool with
    PD of A
    AND we would make
    beautiful kids
    AND he got a j-o-b,
    a house, no baby
    momma, AND a car.
    okay. i gotta come up
    with somethin quick
    he's startin to do dat
    thing with his lip
    okay, okay God
    u dere?
    of course you dere.
    WE need to come
    up with a answer.
    okay, well can
    u give me a hint?
    okay I know, I know
    follow my heart.
    my heart says RUN
    okay just walk away
    real fast.
    tick tock tick tock
    okay i got it
    i'll tell him da
    i.n.y.i.m line
    you know the
    it's not you it's me
    phrase yeah dat
    nah nah cuz
    that's lyin
    okay serenti think
    think think
    okay tell urself the
    truth
    okay yeah I live him
    but do I luv him?
    we've been 2gether
    for 4 months a little
    long to be just now
    sayin it huh?
    well i guess he said
    it so that counts.
    okay decision time
    decision time
    do you luv jovanni arnold,
    serenti gaines?
    okay i'm goin leave
    it up to you mouth
    whateva comes out is
    what I feel....

    I luv you too jovanni.

    dedicated to my ex-lova. :kiss:
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Took me down memory lane. Oh how wonderful a new love\like is.very warm and deeply felt
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks gurl i always like yo positive note you leave :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin in da new way so sweet when we meet our hearts
    warm emotion and fine it to the likings of the soul
    let ya heart speak for u and God guide u unto dis happiness
     
  5. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwww thanks RICH. :kiss:
     
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    Spit it like you did it!
     
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    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your creativity is dreamy...keeps leaving me dazed yet never confused...loved it...keep it up:wave: :wave: :wave: :luvv: :luvv:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed reading this, serenti.
    Peace to ya!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poet----you so swet :kiss:

    cypher----awwwwwwwww your so sweet :kiss: thanks for taking the time to peep it

    skrybe---glad you enjoyed it :) thanks for taking the time out to peep it out :kiss:
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this is hot!! i really like it, keep on comin with em poet.
     
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