Black Poetry : Say you love me!

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say you love me
    Say you love me
    Say you love me
    Say you need me
    Say you need me
    Say you never leave me
    Leave me
    I got love on my mind
    We sitting here in this empty space
    This race
    To see who can love hard
    My heart
    can't take another heart break
    This earthquake
    in my life
    Trying to be your intended wife
    Is so hard
    I gave you the very best of me
    So why am I singing
    It kills me
    It kills me
    It kills me
    Through the fire I was there
    Through the storm I was there
    Even when you went to Jail I was there
    So tell me why after all these things
    I still don't have the ring
    Are you playing me for a fool
    Or do you choose
    To Betray me like the others
    Why smother
    Me
    with your lies
    This disquise
    Devil
    Replace me
    Take me
    For granted
    Take away this hurt and shame
    I can't blame
    all this on you
    Cause I'm the fool
    and so are you
    But look boo
    When you need someone to call on
    Be like me and be strong
    Be strong
    Because no one can ever love you like I have
    Have
    You
    Gone away
    To play
    Daddy
    maybe
    Husband
    this is crazy
    Texting me Feb. 14 [email protected] you
    Love is for the fool
    Fools who fall for this emotion called
    Love
    Love
    Love
    L
    I can't speak it's name
    I can't let you go
    I can't let you go
    Can't
    Let
    Go
    Just make love to me like we always do
    I love you
    Feb. 14
    "Say you love me!"​
     
  2. Emerald_Queen

    Emerald_Queen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good poem! :) Thanks for sharing...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can't see him not saying he love u dearly
    and wit tis ring ( I de wedd )
     
  4. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    This was very poignant....deeply emotional...an open heart.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emotional poem enjoyed the read
     
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