Black Poetry : Say Yes

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **Inspired by Floetry's 'Say Yes'

    Say Yes...
    echoed in my silence.
    You mirrored every
    aspect of love and
    I just sat back and watched as
    you bloomed like some wildflower
    under my gaze.
    I listened to you as your
    smooth lips oozed pure,
    liquid ambrosia, and you
    spoken within the whisper.
    "There is only one for me,
    my soulstar, you have to realize that
    you've made that a possibility.
    I know that you realize the deepness of
    this so we could take that step and
    swim in each others sea, but
    all you have to do is say yes.
    I openly dilute in
    your strong mixture and you
    step in to become my convictor
    my painter and my creator.
    You sat back and waited in the
    calm of security and confidence.
    Your lips smiled and you spoke again.
    "Just remember you make me
    so, so, so , so , so , so......Hmmmmmmmmmm"
    I realized that loving you had
    taken time and the place
    of elevation you were striving for
    seemed unearthly, but you knew that after tonight
    you were mine.
    I sit in silence and contemplation.
    I want...no I need to embrace the clear-cut precision
    of your beauty and float in the waves of your femininity.
    You recognize the butterflies inside me,
    but all I have to do is say yes .
    I open up my mind,
    I rest,
    and embrace your infinity.
    You cover me with your cool love and
    let me know that I make you feel so, so, so , so, so.....Hmmmmm
    I feel my soul and heart being undressed,
    as you whisper in my ears and in my flow...
    SAY YES...

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this piece!You did an excellent job at making me lose sight :eek:hmy:
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Babygirl you are beautiful and a blessing. Thank you so much.
    Love down below for the moment, thats whassup
    ~Dior
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so peaceful within itself
    it took me in love this flow
    ya pen hot to day
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess your right Angel. LOL Thank you for the love.
    Love down below for the moment, thats whassup.
    ~Dior
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again hitting us up with those expressive sensual images, flow on.
     
  7. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love to you Watz. Thank you for feeling me. One love, in a minute.
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my favorite part...

    ....intoxicating flavor...

    flow on poet...
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With a flow that smooth...how can they not say YES. I see and feel the :flirt: in the air for you
    very nice flow...float on...
     
  10. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So,so,so,so, so, so,so, so, so....

    I like how u did this... :nuts: