Black Poetry : Say yes.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Feb 12, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    princess- i be thinking about you
    is weird, by chance
    living each day...like being without you

    still the strength of my soul
    centers me around you
    the combination of thy essence an mine
    creating our special place in divine

    you hold beauty so fine
    i sit alone trying to grasp at
    the fact that you are real
    the preminition of your body by me
    in reality
    to soon be revealed

    in my time and mindframe
    unequalled
    no comparison
    to our combined equation
    nothing but what is between us
    to feel

    aching
    when caressed with the conept
    we have to meet, yet
    i hide away feelings
    through my worn callousness
     
  2. Khasm13

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    dope...this was liquid dope
    flo some more son
    i like your vibe
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hard to let those feelings out and take a chance sometimes...I liked this...keep flowin.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done poet .......u set it off wit dis one
     
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    aching
    when caressed with the conept
    we have to meet, yet
    i hide away feelings
    through my worn callousness



    Feeling this flow...but loving that last stanza...
    Nice work Antar! :toast:
     
  6. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I :heart: this
     
  7. Akilah

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    Yo... dis flow was da' :bomb:


    Much Peace,
    Akilah :peace:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this a work of art....no wait....it was a masterpiece
     
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    whew...loving your flow brotha
     
  10. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks***

    to e'rybody for checkin' out this piece, thanks for taking the time to peep it...

    to all my peeps that replied,
    thanks so much for sharing these words with me
    i got some more i put down today to share
    and et cetera...
    i'm glad ya'll feelin it...

    One love,

    /antar