Black Poetry : Say Yes

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as he.......
    Pulls up the sheets over his head
    and prepaers to his body into my bed....
    I feel the cool sweat off his skin
    I hear his shallow breathing deep within
    and I can't help but wonder
    Whats....
    underneath those boxers waiting for me
    My curiositys getting close to me
    But I..

    Think of the promise about keepin my legs closed
    Im trying to wait til I'm married....I suppose

    Then I...
    Turn around and look into his calm brown eyes

    The smile on his face that shows some surpirse....
    I..
    Pleged to myself that nothing would happen
    W're both sleepin in this bed and thers no tounge swappin
    I'm dressed in a sports bra and shorts, he has on only boxers
    My minds soo in the gutter cuz I wanna .......

    Look....
    And we're facing back to back underneath the covers
    Trying...
    to excercise self control and not become lovers
    His body is just soo tight that boy's got a six pack..
    I have looked at him before..theres nothing he lacks
    And to sleep beside this man who wants me just as bad..
    The though of going to bed still dressed makes me sad
    But...
    I respect the boundaries that he has set..
    And I try to sleep cuz theres nuttin i should fret...

    ..And just as I'm slippin away into the world of sleep..
    Over to my right side..does he slowly creep....
    And at this I'm appalled and I think he's changed his mind
    I feel the light push of his hand on my behind....
    He over towers me with his eyes holding that "gaze"
    I slip into his soul and follow that maze
    And he holds me into his arms and tells me that theres no pushin
    If i don't wanna do this, he'll turn away without once again lookin
    But I ease him on ...with an ever sight caress
    I chnge both of our lives by simply saying...yes
     
  2. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum....This is a Hot! Hot! one...I like this...Rico
     
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    it's so hot...i'm burning up
    up
    nice sexy scribe...i hope that it changed for the betta
    peace
    khasm
     
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    wow.......i love this one!! the flow, subject, and everything!! beautiful...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out
    i feel da heat
    from da night
    in bed
    where only to
    lay one's head
    but the mental
    fire of great desires
    set a blaze deep
    inside this lustful maze
    i feel da heat
    from da bliss
    of two doing dis
    whisper words
    secretly yes
    life change
    it was da test
    truely u know da rest

    Tyteeeeeeeeeeeheated flow !!!
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya...
    all you gotta do is say yes...don't deny what you feel...so so so floetic...I'm in tha feelin
     
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    Well alright.............Swt-t..................We see you said yes...saw your resistance breaking down as I read each line. This was quite "HOT"... you go girl...you know ur gonna have to write a Pt. 2 to this, right!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rico- I am so glad that you liked it :heart:

    Khas- I'm glad you liked it and...welll, the future will tell if things changed for the better:)

    Lovely- Thank you!! :heart: :heart: :)

    Dream- thats where I got it from :)

    Angelic- I m cooking up a part 2 as we speak :)
     
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    Wow! Another tight one. You are truly a genius in your own way.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    foxy aww thank you so much !!:blush:. I really appricate that compliment