Black Poetry : ...say yes.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by elayne., Oct 15, 2002.

  1. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i release my thoughts to you…
    …will you let them play?

    let’s say… that i… softly…
    set them adrift on the
    wings of the many mental
    vibrations that permeate from
    my souls concentration…
    & they… without vacillation
    gravitated directly to you…
    would you… willingly
    allow them uninterrupted access
    into the deepest recesses of
    your enigmatic essence?

    if i were to sweetly unleash
    multiple mindgasms using
    the passionate energy
    created in my always wet dreams
    …starring you&me… would
    they be freely permitted to…
    traverse thru the universe
    & find their way to your
    heart’s front door to
    boldly implore that you
    feel me like i’m feeling you?

    i want you to… dig me
    profound-ly… like i’m diggin’ you

    i mean…

    an even swap ain’t no swindle
    (or so it seems)… therefore…
    it’s only fair that we should
    arrange for the exchange of
    some sort of emotional currency…
    with an unconditional
    no-love-back guarantee…
    ‘cause you see… i plan on
    being wrapped up inside your
    God-like mentality for
    countless eternities…

    so if i release my thoughts to you
    & you only…
    …will you let them play?

    ...say "yes".
    (you Know you want to.)



    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'yes i'll let u as my mind open freely
    as i sit and listen intently
    as u implored my thoughts
    yes come play i wan't ya too.............

    da heart is open as the mind mentally
    let's play!!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l say maann this wuz tyte ultra head:D
     
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    Ms elayne. This is what I'm talking bout! :)

    aal

    me
     
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    "i plan on being wrapped up inside your God-like mentality for countless eternities"

    elayne...i see you are still shining as brightly as you were when we met...extravagent piece...bountiful gratitude from the skye for this creation :) :) :)

    1luv
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL @ J'hiah "ultra head" on the real layne, you know me and i know you but sis you gets betta with tyme and that's a compliment. i love the way you do love, and dammit ain't nothing wrong with being sprung!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Queen Elayne,

    This satisfied my poetic cravings. See you like showing off...........................keep it up. It reminds a brother that there is never a shortage of good things in the poetic world. God has blessed you with a gift. Use it to the fullest.

    Verb
     
  8. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks, chirens.


    rich. so you ready to play, huh? :lol: hmm...
    i ain't tryin' to get beat up... so imma leave that
    alone!! :wink: hahaha. thank you!
    hugedome. thank you sweet lil brother of
    mine... what would i do witout chou?? :heart:
    you. i'm oh-so glad you approve! :D thanks!
    two. you make me shyne, gyrl!! & i appreciate
    you soooo much!! asante!! (memba dat?) :):):)
    soulsistahlilbit. thank you for the comp! i'm takin'
    it to heart... & Please believe it means a lot to me.
    garrison. i am humbled by your presence. you &
    your response mean the world to this queen! :)

    itsallLove.
     
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    of course I will allow unrestricted access into me, baby...i mean, why wouldn't? you are so beautiful...i love this piece...and i love you too :)
     
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    alwaysthanks.


    poeticmensi. thanks for not letting this one
    get by you! :) ...you are just as beautiful & the
    love is returned... endless-ly. :heart:

    itsallLove, chile.