Black Poetry : Say My Lines

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say my lines, "how do you do sir?"
    "Its a nice evening", he says
    As we both can so easily read eachother
    How sheepish we feel taking another chance
    "So how do you do, tonight?" he askes me with another smile..
    "I'm doing fine" as I kindly reply
    Reserving my stance as we flirt casually dancing around my mind
    As a suggestion of melodic savor
    I stood there calmly
    Still another chance yet to dissappear in the wind
    Yet another fling and another hope of choosing the right man
    Still inside everything wants to embrace him
    To loose restraint and plung into this affair if only for the moment
    To just simply own that it's there...
    I can't own it so I just think about how it could be
    If words were spoken and risks were taken
    But I know it will take me there...
    There will I will soon regret it...
    If it only lasts for a moment...
    There were my secrets are revealed
    And my nakedness leaves me speachless
    Rehearsing my thoughts once again
    I'm so nervous as I look to the left and to right
    An escape route
    Something
    To find some fresh air
    Where I can release myself for a moment
    And melow in my quiet thoughts
    Untainted unrestrainted
    Just alone to inspire some thought
    Just hope my mind doesn't rought
    Where the deep spiriitual things I was taught
    Every price paid in full
    And with it I was bought
    Sober my face
    To face the streets again
    Where temptation has led me dead in sinn
    Eager to feel protected
    Eager to feel another heart
    Eager to feel his embrace
    And the solid form of his body and bone structure
    Not intimidated just to have a taste
    And drown in endless pleasure
    Till I am his delight and he is my joy
    To please like a child to a toy
    I'm not dumb or stupid for thinking this way
    When I want you near
    To hear your voice so deep in rhythm is clear and syncopated
    Hypnotic I flow to the sound of your beat and its drumming procession
    leaves me numb for digestion
    And if you read in between the lines
    I'm growing out of a little girl into a woman to her man
    Tasting what's good and evil to obtain wisdom and understand
    To put childish things in the past and to fully comprehend with my adult mind but innocence of a learning soul who wants to know all there is to know about life.
    My dreams brings Gods provisionn
    To conquere division
    To bring clarity with precision
    Such an honorable mention
    You've held my attention
    My body and my mind
    You've whispered of unendless pleasure all alone that I would always remember and to you I would sing and postrate myself in full worship to you alone
    Release my burdens
    Free my soul
    But with knowing what it is and it can't be
    We say our lines to eachother
    Walking away knowing our rhapsody

    D.S. another music melody...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hey DS you know i'm loving this piece wow !!!!
     
  3. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow..this plays out like a symphony....a elegant and rich write, desert...you are to be commended.
     
  4. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats dope.... I like this... makes ya feel all warm inside....
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich,you're so kind!, abstract219 you feeling me?,hun...hee hee hee..Defiantson... i was feeling warm and fuzzy inside when I wrote this... lol! Thank you all for reading this... blessings..Desert Storm
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Make sure to give love to other artist too, they wanna hear how they made you feel about the pieces they did too.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey d.s. its been awhile hope everything was alright with cha. im loving this gurl do continue to grace us with this style of yours.
     
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    Absolutely a Fabulous write.
    Much Luv
     
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    Nice piece Ms. Storm:welldone:
    :spinstar:
     
  10. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nevar...you have to go through the turbulence in order soar if you know what I mean!?! Life has been great for me... Just getting my wings so I can fly. Defiantson, i will definately show luv, in fact I'll be looking for ya...4everluv thank u, spicy gurl!, good to read ya.
    peace... d.s.
     
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