Black Short Stories : Say it aint(pt 1)

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  1. MissHoney

    MissHoney Active Member MEMBER

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    Mason left Sam’s, to go and get a bite
    And while he was out, he bought something for his wife

    So after buying a set, he met up with his girl
    Lied about the diamond, and had to buy her pearls

    After dropping her off, he went to rent a suit
    Armani, High Class, he had women to seduce

    Now after Serena his wife, and Katrina the girlfriend
    Baby Mamma Leah dropped in and said, your turn with Ben

    Now caught up in a problem, he called his baby Trina
    Dropped off Ben, cause he had to do Serena

    Serena had to leave, her friends wedding was in an hour
    So Mason got undressed, and went to take a shower

    Then Katrina dropped in, got play time in
    And at the same time, Leah called like where the hell is Ben

    So he left Katrina at Serena’s house
    And went to do Trina, took Ben, then was out

    Dropped Ben at Leah’s, then hurried to Serena
    Got dressed in his suit, and got rid of Katrina

    Like OJ in 95’, Mason rushed back to Leah
    And fed lies, to unwine, saying he felt bad for how he treat her

    Now with Sam Mason goes, man I had a day
    If only all these girls knew, that I was really gay
     
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    this really flow as a poem moreso then a story
    is that what this was a poem ???

    welcome to the short stories place of vent & creation ...
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I noticed part 4 was posted, so I figured I'd better start with part 1. I wasn't expecting that final line, whoa. I wonder what other surprises will surface?
     
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    Tyte write. wasnt expecting that bomb to be dropped. on the down low indeed. where can we find parts 2 n 3?
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please Say it ain't THIS BAD........:em3000:
    THIS GUY IS ALREADY GOT MY FEATHERS RUFFLED!
    GRRRR