Black Poetry : Savour My Flavor

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Oct 31, 2005.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nubian black-Blacker than Nubian Ha
    Im the most influentual
    Come correct when you step to this nubian God
    Nubian persauna get you addicted
    Lyrics and Flows keep you a-- listening
    Nubian king looking for a nubian queen
    Gave one a chance-But she wasnt ready for me
    First move was wrong said she wasnt into p-o-e-t-r-y
    I talked-She listened-But that didnt do it for me
    See to be my queen our levels must match
    Our "US" dont exsist if our levels not attract
    Im a potent ferioucious brother when I thread through a piece
    When my mind gets thinking about the crime in the streets
    When the papparazzi all over handcuffing to me
    This world on my shoulders need me to be hercules
    The pain run through a brother like the victim was me
    When rodney king was beaten like the beating was me
    When a tear shed my eye some people couldnt believe
    I thought I was a thug but it wasnt in me
    Im more educated and the flavor is deep
    I need a queen in my life to stand strong next to me
    When no shoulder to cry my surroundings are the victim you see
    I get stubborn sometimes but thats the devil in me
    No one is perfect but God yes I seek
    I read other poets to get some outreach
    I read bible scriptures while pastors prey over me
    Now I see life is more than glamour and girls
    With some sex and some pearls
    And some nines and **** girl

    Saga Continues.......

    If you got this far you really feeling this or
    You just want to know where im going with this
    Im trying touching the inner aspects of yor mind
    Not just hit you with poetry lines
    Not just get you stuck on my ryhmes
    Im trying to hit you with flow that relaxes your mind
    Puts your mind on recline
    Reminisce and unwind
    Be a victim to my love-hate crime
    See when I can get you writing what I write I know I am great
    But when you indulge on my words that keeps my faith
    That gives me a reason to write all day
    Give love-show love-to others poets all day
    Cause Tantrum is nothing if my poetic sistas and brothas dont hear
    The flavor you savour I just put in your ear!

    Love & Respect 2 All My Poets!!
     
  2. info-moetry

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    PEACE GOD...........
     
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    I caught all the "flavor" you spiced this piece with
    I'll standing in line ...to catch the first bid
    for more of your lyrics, that shoots to the soul
    it sounds so refreshing...like old tarnished Gold

    awesome work poet, thanks for sharing it
     
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    When you do find that queen whom is your soul mate, and you write about it, make sure you place some of those flows here, okay. I took my time, and savored your words poet, feeling the flow.
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You 2 All thats feeling this keeps me going knowing my words are heard ya know!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u making it felt cross the glaze
    this drop was smooth and hot as a blaze
    tyte ....................
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You for the love Brother $$RICH$$
    Appreciate your movement towards Unity
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tru dat indeed we have to unify and unite as bruthas & sistas
     
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    love the flow keep up the good work from Nevar!!!!!!:spinstar:
     
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    Every line was sweet and I even got that aftertaste, (a good one) Gone head brutha! It was hottt.
     
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