Quiet Poetry Lounge : SAVORING HER GLOW !!!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Deep dark sweet & divine
    her beauty of love like sunshine
    my heart lone as it savor it all
    the gleam of glist sparkling star
    she hold an essence near or far

    Soft and supply to a touch
    one in arms to cover & clutch
    like Red Velvet shining bright
    entering my soul wit greater light
    majestically under care of our
    candle light at night

    savoring a regal hugh lend of elegance
    of distinction to an already stunning ,
    vivacious ensemble as my handz continue
    to slide ova the southen smooth soulace
    tracing her love deep within i know she is
    real through my vision and dream
    i carry it upon my dock daily and smile

    My heart savoring the bundle of joy
    she pose upon my soul and i've kissed
    her mango lips in the indingo sunrise
    the elements of her beauty i hold close

    skin aglow like a tiny flame
    whispers heard calling my name
    gentle caresses felt from the
    ink that drips , i pose my love unto u
    and give my unconditional being
    i've taste the rapture of ya body through
    the stain left within the temple of my mind
    your like black radiant of ocean pearls

    I savor it inside my chambers of slumber
    forth art my loveth i dewell, captured in
    the glisting beam of ya love i vow to a
    foreverness and manifest the gloey of u

    listen my beloveth as i write part two ...
    :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :luv
    :
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see this got deep your heart is glowing for i see your smile within the ocean of love as the rapture have taken hold...awaiting part 2....

    Awww now my Richie Rich write it flow it this was kissed with some sweet ink
    love how it captured me and sent me a savoring moment to hold....

    ok ok i love it suga bear :hearts4:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Part two? ...whoa...I'm still inhaling part one, beautiful piece, I don't know how you do what you do...
    ...but you always do
    I love the way you gift wrap your Queens, and in our eyes...you are the "KING"
    you're a wonderful person and truly a treasure to behold
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Angel through every wave a love
    glist on shore and behold thy loveth the
    only thing to do then is savor the moment


    Thankz Queentswana it's done from the depth
    of true love and heart that allows the handz to
    manifest the moment in savor and keep it safe
    happy u like it , as i write pt.2 of the truth !


    I Thank you both for the love and support y'all give and sho to me
    i am so humbled and your reward is due u surely i shall fulfill.......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words so richly describe the depths of her glow upon you. Flow on brotha, I'm looking forward to part 2.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Watz as it's written in the name of love
    the ink stain the page yet savor in my heart to
    a foreverness and lasting bliss i vision it to be .


    Most humbled for the lovin support and continue visits
    surely what's due u i shall bring , stay tune to pt. two..
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're beautiful and there isn't much more I can say because everything you write seems to capture me and I like the feeling I get when I read. It is A beautiful thing that in this world where seeing is believing tha some of us can still see beauty without seeing it. You my dear are certainly one of those people.
     
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    thank u soulful2006 .....that's true when u pose love deep
    u can see the un-seen through visional format ................
     
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    Beautiful as alwaysmy friend just beautiful.
     
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    likewise , likewise ..........Thank u
     
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