Black Poetry : Savor The Flavor

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I taste her,
    the sweet delight,
    on the night when my tongue ventures just below
    all the spots where I usually go—
    well, it’s kind of like…..
    1000 ripe peaches releasing their juices
    overflowing and raging
    ,
    but description loses
    the intensity I feel
    when I experience for real
    her hands stroking my hair,
    I don’t know how to deal
    with
    the caresses and ‘yes’s
    as her next moan meshes
    with the flick of my tongue
    and my passion comes undone
    lost in an ocean of motion
    feeling like we’ve just sung
    an erotic duet
    that’s got her so wet
    but I’ll drown before stopping
    and I have to admit
    that I like it (I love it)
    can’t get enough of it,
    consuming her succulence
    and that’s just the half of it,
    cause she’s my fire,
    my queen, my erotic desire,
    answer to my prayers, subject of my wildest dreams
    I’ll do anything to please her, to show her that I need her,
    and I know she’ll do the same,
    this expressed intently in the affection
    in her screams of my name….
    so, I savor her flavor
    which has never been sweeter
    (call me whatever you want,
    just call me a love ‘eater’!!)
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now... that's like RIGHT!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  3. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D wildflower....thanks for the response....just expressing my feelings on a subject that I'm very adamant about...;).....lol....anyway, the response is much appreciated

    keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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