Black Poetry : Saved by "Your Love"

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    did you like my judo move?

    if i was your sumo, would it behoove you

    to wrestle with me a while?

    if i nestled up to you like Screetch, would you smile?

    you're so special that i'm forced to write with the unusual style

    of pretending that our vessel

    is already sailing down our Nile

    to freedom



    love,

    howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what was awaiting ......tyte drop
     
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    This is what your poetry does to me.
    It always keeps me smiling.
    Very sweet piece Howard.

    Much Luv
     
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    Definitely change for similes and metaphors, but effective--Amun-Ra
     
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