Black Poetry : SAVE THE LAST DANCE

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  1. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    I couldn't help but to see you across the room.
    By the looks of your appearance I had to make my move soon.
    As I walked across the dance floor I enhaled my perfume,And twissed my hips and thighs to the song tune.
    When I looked In your eyes I suddenly realize that your eyes was the same color as the sun rise.
    As Im grab your hand,I siad may I have this dance,
    This felt like the movie called the TRUE ROMANCE.
    Without a answer or a pep you swept me off my feet,
    our bodies was so close we were burning in heat,
    wishing that this song would last forever so I can never take my seat,
    Everything about you was so perfect and neat.

    Im praying that one day at the altar we met.(SAVE ME THE LAST DANCE)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    slowly as u move in
    watching u from within
    soft sweet gentle twist
    whisper let's dance miss
    saving this last dance for u
    deep in your eyez i see a
    radiant glow as we prance
    across da flo
    in a electrical maze of beat
    dancin and movin our feet
    slowly partaken into ya sway
    lady sweet lady let us
    dance the night away

    I love this flow very smooth and warm
     
  3. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Dance

    You know He will probably end up being your husband. We, as females know the man who we will wed if it is real. They don't have a clue but we know.
    Save me some Cake.
     
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    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im really feelin that
    short but sweet
    ya did ya thang on that one
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww.... that was nice got to love a good love story.

    Mannie
    Host and Poet of the Verbal High
    www.theverbalhigh.com
     
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    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks 4 all the love and when i do meet that right one, the hole destee family will be invited.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And we'll hold you to it ms>Get It, lol. Sometimes it's just that way, you see someone from across the room and there's just something about them. Enjoyed the flow.
     
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