Black Poetry : Save Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Nov 10, 2005.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time to get back in the race.
    All of my pain and fears I must face
    My soul longs to feel your spiritual embrace.
    I must get back to my Father
    My soul can't take this no longer
    I cry out to you
    Cause I know nothing else to do
    I have not ceased to your call
    I know now this is why I fall
    Fall deeper into dispair
    But I know you can repair
    Repair my wounded heart
    Now its time for a new start
    The world has tried to break me
    Lord, come and save me

     
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    That is both Beautiful and Powerful at the same time..........

    The creator would never leave one of her/his jewels alone!!
     
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    Wow....my dear sister this is awsome!!!! There is nothing like a "Fresh Start"
     
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    WOW
    This is deep and true
    Like you took the words out of my mouth
    Kike you ready my mind
    Very nice piece poet
     
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    Isn't it wonderful that the Lord always accepts us no matter how many mistakes we feel we've made? I appreciated this flow.
     
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    no place like the Fathers grace this was on point
     
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    Sister SoBlessed ... this is BEAUTIFUL! :love:

    Take your time, for you are not alone!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Loving it.
     
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    Hi soblessed
    very deep pray of thoughts
    we are never alone
    keep the flow coming

    Much Love

    Peace
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you to everyone that replied
    Thanks for the love and support
     
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