Black Poetry : ...Saturday Rain...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its slowly raining outside on this Saturday afternoon
    The darkness in the sky does everything but bring me gloom
    I’m encircled in your arms, protected in everyway
    The quiet whispers you say make me want to lay
    The rain is soft and quiet, as the wind whispers my name
    You kiss me so gentle, that I’m intrigued in this game
    First we start with a kiss just to warm us up some
    The rain has made the winds blow harder as they come
    In parallel that is the way that I want to come
    Hard and fast as the rains sets and rests some
    But the rainy winds of nature hold off for a while
    As you and me begin to slowly reconcile
    While the raindrops fall you kiss me with your lips
    Hearing them lay upon the house you thrust your hips
    The raindrops fall in sync with your thunderous thrusts
    And that’s when I notice a sudden thunderous hush
    All of a sudden the rain gets harder and Harder and HARDER
    And you plunge deep farther and Farther and FARTHER
    The thunder is my cry as I come over again
    It booms and shakes and cries, to never feel the rain
    Then lightning comes to join in the height of my pleasure
    Flashing, and crashing and lighting the sky with its measure
    Soon the rain is tired from pleasure just like I am
    So as it grows quiet and rests from measure, I can
    Kiss you slowly to its rhythm making a sensual song
    A song only you and I know about so very strong
    Just as the rain gets quiet again the thunder starts to roll
    I’m rested and ready again for your love to take its toll…


    ...i'm lovin' the Saturday rain...
    :love: :D :love:
     
  2. Waa Waa

    Waa Waa New Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin this. You've captured the moment so well.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot:)
     
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    nice touch....
    feelin this alot
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    anymore comments?
     
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    very sensual.
    i'm really REALLY likin' this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u smoothly swoop through me
    this was str8 awesome i felt it
    so deep within let ya pen continue
     
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    i'm loving the saturday rain 2... [email protected]..lol
     
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