Black Haiku : Saturday, 4:PM

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by abstract219, Jan 21, 2006.

  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Sun peeking thru clouds
    reflected off a still lake...
    can I just sit here?





    (c)2005 dennis lee
     
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    watchin waves cascade
    feelin the warmth of it's flair
    reflecting moments
     
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    Clouds under my head
    The ocean's foam beneath me
    Peacefully, I sleep
     
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    Oh my, not at all, it actually means we loved it. Check out some of the other haiku in the forum... Sometimes we just comment on them, but usually, even if we comment, we tend to keep the flows going... Sorry you misunderstood...you're wonderful!
     
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    wheeeewww.....
    thank you....i havent noticed that in other threads...
    but thank you.
    reminded me of those old graffiti tags i used to do....when someone would come and write over it...lol
    pardon my insecurities.....
    thank you.
     
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