Black Poetry : Satisfaction

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Feb 17, 2003.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why is that I can never satisfy you
    Either way I can’t win or loss for trying to please you
    When really your level of satisfaction is unobtainable
    Till you evaluate “self” and get self gratification
    But all of your concern and worry about my “ups and downs”
    Just keeps me stronger and above higher ground
    See all that energy you put into focusing in on my downfalls
    I use it to help me going headstrong
    I guess the whole “crab barrel effect “ is true
    So is being down there lonely and blue?

    Well I see the light at the top
    And regardless of how bad you may want me to
    I won’t stop on my journey to personal success
    And treating my life with nothing less than the best
    See I am focused, driven, ambitious and talented
    And with people like yourself around just gives me the “extra push”
    I need when I am feeling doubt
    So I want to take this time to thank you for all that you have done
    Through all the s**t, the lies, the doubt yet still I overcome
    The hate you have manifested inside of you
    Has build nothing but strength within me and it is because of you
    And your misery I will forever push on to victory
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CREAM RISES TO THE TOP

    Don't stop... 1poetsought
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice to see what life be .....continue ya journey ahead......
    and keep flowin' in my ear
     
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    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the love is appreciated
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im digging the I am a survivor feel to this, we gotta go through those trials and tribulations to know our true strength, I really like what you are saying here very strong piece


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