Black Poetry : ~))!Satin Prophesies #1!((~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The spoken words,
    Thinly wrapped in pure velvet;
    seemingly rose like the steam
    off a hot road.
    I embraced them...
    They carried me.
    Every nuance and every instance
    became my institution.
    I loved and the words loved me;
    spilling from my lips, hips, eyes and
    loins,
    I spoke and each one weighted heavy,
    like Spanish golden coins.
    Spectacular and
    Magnificent, the way thoughts
    merged into words that pushed
    past my lips in a steady
    drip.
    Drip...drop...drip...drop...drip...drop...
    They fall like honey in a steady slip.
    Down my chin and even from my pen tip.
    I made a mess in my lap.
    Words that covered me like warm satin.
    They whispered unknown things that
    made my ears ring and...
    My pen flies across paper, hoping to catch every
    subtle inflection.
    Close your eyes child, and sing;
    because you have embraced the power of your
    ancestors right down to your knees...
    That sweet, potent satin Prophesy

    Copyright 2004
    ~Satin Prophesy
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was #1 awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaawe sooky sooky... :wink:

    This was as "Sleek" as satin...

    so I slipped it over my mental canvas...slowly

    so I could feel every fiber of magnificence

    that went into the scribe of it...

    Flame on poet...

    Sage is loving this!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am agreeing wit sage and rich this was
    silky smooth.....very nice write
     
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