Black Poetry : sarcasm

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    sarcasm is the orgasm that gets me off
    when i can feel absolutely nothing
    for example when i ignore ignorant people
    just because they're saying something
    maybe what i need to help me succeed

    a rated r movie .... gangsta rap
    a hate inspired racial attack a six pack
    a government linked phone tap... pornography
    violence on tv. a std. political hypocrisy
    parents who neglect me
    a system making too much money off of my negative acts-
    to positively correct me an incurable-man made disease-
    to terminally infect me illiteracy uncontrollable greed
    a cop like furman a preacher who considers passing the plate-in
    a sermon
    or meeting with president clinton so i can begin learning
    how not to inhale when smoking weed

    without these things
    life would be like soda pop-without the fizz
    i can't believe what a wonderful world this is
    or think of a better place to raise my kids
    ooooooooh/that felt so gooooood yes/Y E S
    sarcasm is the orgasm that makes me excrete
    premature thoughts that are incomplete
    like-when i send money to hungry children in cambodia
    and throw trash at the hungry children who sleep in my streets
    children who act as if they need shelter over their heads
    look human enough to be fed to have clothes on their backs
    or shoes on their feet
    gimmie a break

    we have to settle disputes in bosnia iran iraq and kuwait
    before we deal with the problems in the united states of hysteria
    i think i'm about to reach my apex
    so if you don't want to get doused
    please clear the area
    garbage men oops engineers of sanitation
    get paid more to dispose of waste than teachers get to educate a nation
    that couldn't be why the country is in such a state of deterioration
    maybe people have retreated into themselves
    because of overwhelming frustration
    and the resulting problems plagues and pains
    are the result of unfulfilling self-induced stimulations
    and the reason people are getting jacked by others
    is because jacking off has become a played out sensation
    N A W - it couldn't be that

    sarcasm is the orgasm that gives me spasms in my back
    did you know in jail terms
    a kilo of coke is less than a vile of crack
    what i meant to say is
    did you know that the rich don't get richer
    and that the poor don't get treated unfairly
    it's all a matter of perception
    the only difference between screwing
    and being screwed
    is just a matter of position and the source of the erection
    and if you happen to notice any VoCaL iNfLeCtioNs
    i'm simply getting one off
    without your detection

    aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhwas it good for you
    sarcasm is my orgasm
    and i'm not ashamed to flaunt it
    and since i got what i wanted

    -beat it
    i'm through

    always :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: hookup
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
    mad tyte drop brutha
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A touch of sarcasm can often help us to make it through the day, a handful and...who knows how long we'll last. To wit, we are praised for living life "tail" backwards. Cleverly posed.
     
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    now this was str8 i enjoyed this read..nice work Poet!!!!
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:

    ...I want to speak
    but there is nothing coming out
    ...I need to catch my breath

    WHOA... :weird:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...Could you be any more "Sacastically Brilliant"
    A "Metaphorical Genius"
    with a "Gorgeous Mind"...
    there was so much to ingest...
    I felt at times I wouldn't be able to take it all in...
    This piece...spilled and spilled and spilled
    until...I was tapping the bottom of the bottle
    attempting to get the last drop...
    but you were finished...

    Does...enlightenment always stun a person like this-----> :weird:

    Loving u and this flow...Ur Sage ​
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smh @ my :nuts: sister hehehe *giggles*

    Ummm sister you get him majority of the time can us CIVILIAN Folks get a sip of it PUH-LEASE I mean goodness
    you got the keys to the treasury you still ova here takin our rations i mean gurllllll come on now smh

    *lookin to see if there is any left in the bottle* daggnabbit sista i LOVE You and everything but you are my SISTER can i at least get a SIP smh hehehehe

    Anotha gem my brotha anotha gem :)
     
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