Black Poetry : Sarah beauty

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beloveth :

    My love 4 u is deathless
    it seem to hold me breathless
    wit such a mighty spread of air

    With all these changes made
    only u remain da same in my heart
    from days pass where we start
    it was then my soul was marked

    In da memories of a blissful love
    envision of us well spent as u come
    creepin ova me again
    i felt most gratified to God and u

    I've enjoyed these mental views
    and the hope of us in thy future
    my dear lady upon divine providence
    our love was written in script i scribe

    I cannot behold u without emotions
    my heart still answers to yo voice
    my blood boils at yo footsteps
    and upon thy face a flirtation lifted

    Fate means that my loveth for thee
    shall be burnt into da deepest grain
    inside da spirit of da most delightful wonders
    of only u giveth such wonderful encaustic process
    of despair , hope , intoxicating joy
    wit great patience my desperation for u lingers

    My love is transparent wit a possession to bring
    out da inner soul of my full colours to keep our
    love forever fresh the passion that warm me
    is a lasting one which da obliterating hands of
    tyme shall never be able to efface us .

    I defy u to forget me utterly
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:
    This piece is ever so beautiful.


    Much Luv
     
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    Thank u sista for the warmth and lovin visit within da Sarah !!!
     
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    I agree this piece is indeed very beautiful again you have written a wonderful poem.
     
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    Thank u Fattn from my heart u too are very artistic and creative
     
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    With a love as intense as this, I can't see how Sarah will ever forget. This was so lovely.
     
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    under da maze of sarah falls on da memories of sweet love one shall
    forever remain of thee ......thank u watz for that warm love of support.
     
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