Black Poetry : sanity freeze

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Niyha, Mar 19, 2004.

  1. Niyha

    Niyha Member MEMBER

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    my epistles start pistils that fertilize to make
    concrete soiled roses ruined by murder lies and hate
    those that start pistols missed the point of why its born
    depraved by deprivation from the crown it should adorn
    unsaved by celebrations of a crown composed of thorns…

    a mirror shown in the dark shows a fraction of attraction
    a true beauty should see when shown an actual refraction
    retraction ~
    a mirror in the light during a sanity freeze
    can only relay the beauty that the spiritual sees
    the status of the spirit is what the seer believes…

    education and religion both were born inside a man
    who built the biggest buildings based on blessing of his hands
    and money making merits deemed the best by who could fool
    the most meandering into a monarchy to rule
    so jesus and muhammad fight like bushes and saddam
    don’t matter if it’s if they’re using words or using bombs
    the rulers are the kings and queens and people are just pawns…

    the rulers are the kings and queens and people are just pawns…

    so…
    the spirit’s status is based on everything it sees and
    education and religion make us doubt what we believe in
    and if you’re stronger than the system..
    that’s when your sanity freezes…

    if you're stronger than the system then your sanity freezes...

    *it's ok to be crazy*
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave:
    wonderful scribe
    loving how you
    compose the thoughts
    indeed
    please flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way you posed this, the chaos of the world, making your sanity freeze, artistically laid.
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As a wise man once said,"Makes me wanna holler"...

    Nice piece.
     
  5. Kamau~

    Kamau~ Active Member MEMBER

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    wow...this piece is crazy fresh...i liked it
     
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