Black Poetry : Sangria

Desert Storm

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I take a sip
And it melts
In my mouth

And caresses
My tongue

With it's savor

Easy on the heart
Just trying
To calm
Ma nerves
Before
I eat dinner
Tonight

Yo escucho
Pues,
Yo espero

I listen
While
I wait

So it
Can go down

Sangria
The taste

Like
Honey

And
The
Beverage

Makes
Me
Wanna

Settle
Down
And
Relax

Sangria
Is
Ma best friend

Desert Storm
 
Sounds like something I need

...>appears from nowhere>

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was smooth and relaxing like a quiet summer evening touched by a cool breeze.

I also liked the way you melded the two languages together. It is sometimes difficult to merge different languages into a cohesive poem or essay but you pulled it off quite nicely.

Have you ever read anything by Pablo Neruda?

Question?
Where can I get some of that?

peace&1luv

<disappears into the night<...
 
Fadin In...

I'm not too sure, I think you can get it at a winery or trader joe's it was a gift to me so, yeah, and thanx for the compliment. It's not that hard if you know what you're talking about. Ha ha ha, and no, I've never read Pablo Neruada before. I think I've heard of him I'm not sure. But I'll have to check him out. Thanks a lot for the reference.
Briskly Fading Out ...

Sincerely,
Desert Storm
 

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