Black Poetry : Sandbagged

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Feb 12, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't EVER think
    I'm don't feel you, Boo
    Or read into
    What's revealed in you
    Concerning my feelings
    Reasoning we've grown apart

    EVERY thought you're expressing
    I really am hearing
    Your conscious...
    Appealing,
    Survival mentality

    There's NOTHING to fear dear
    I'm deep in your corner
    Although quite the loner
    I've come to adore
    YOU...

    TOGETHERNESS is such bliss
    Don't dismiss all of this
    Rather,
    Seal with a dap-kiss
    How LOVE :flirt:
    Can been blessed

    Accusing you,
    Won't pay for me
    God's grace is our calling
    We VALIDATE
    All He creates ~
    Deserving but nothing :roll:


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes !
    u really put this out there into da light
    tyte write
     
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    beautiful
    each verse indeed
    touch my heart
    wonderful vibes indeed
    nice one poet
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, as always.

    We appreciate you.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful my brotha the sense of peace in this scribe was nice :)
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully posed
    likes the vibe indeed......:angel1:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Regard the society of women
    Lovely and magnificent!
    Ladies personified.