Black Poetry : samelove shame love .... part 1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by herlove, Apr 23, 2003.

  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    same love what a shame love
    no one is to blame love ... as long as there is a God above love
    no one could keep us apart love ..... we were destined from the very start love the very essence of u is impressed upon my heart love

    same love what a shame love
    life is a funny game love
    all these strings seem to pull and tug love
    man it was u i really dug love
    we were off the hook and unplugged love

    same love what a shame love
    so others came love
    can we wait for and who does and what is was it what was ???
    how would i lose u love, need to tell u i still chose u love
    just love to see u love, wish i could be with u love
    honestly i was counting on we love gotta be love what about me love

    same love what a shame love
    u could not deny love, this would be your only tie love
    in moments of fun often on the run love, to be born the imagery of one love, now i am going in sain love

    same love what a shame love
    u wanted fame love to be the one to rescue the dame love
    is wish to me u would have just came love

    same love what a shame love
    no u r the hero love hard to look in the mirror love the reflection u see is not what was meant to be

    same love what a shame love
    give to me your burdens love speak of those uncertainties love
    those that are born in the freshness of the morning dew love

    same love what a shame love
    feeling lost and lonely love like u missed your one and only love
    same love what a shame love
    what is it security love u know that comes with maturity love
    don't think start over but think begin love cause i am your friend love for u i will twist turn and bend love

    same love what a shame love
    in me happiness you would proclaim love
    defined under the same name
    same love what a shame love
    how would u reconize without a face love yet each touch has it place love those memories you could not erase love .....(c)

    2003herlove

    to be cont'd
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    ok...tight part 1...let's see about 2
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. sarcasm4eva

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    im feelin ur flow.............tight poem....much love :)
     
  4. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just like life... tricks in the bag khasm ....thanks friend


    thanks sarcasm4eva .... puting things in perspective
     
  5. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love...

    [love can be a strange thing... but dhat was tight... kind of mix between love by music and just some old emotions. :).. i like alot.. that old crazy love :D
     
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    nice drip...........looking 4 more
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am feelin your flow..
    nice drop...
     
  8. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is tight. It's hot. Got me thinking about all the loves I've had. Shame for sure.


    Blessings,
    Roni
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooth
    oh so very smooth
    nice scribe indeed
    Peace
     
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