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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mr marion, Dec 27, 2001.

  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am enjoying this time with you
    dining with you
    smiling and making plans with you
    growing
    learning
    getting to know you

    I am excited by the things you do
    the way you do
    and babe having sex with you

    ..........................is whip cream on a banana split

    You have a certian way about you
    lifting me up when I'm feelin blue
    calling me boo
    giving more attention then a staff in a hospice do

    I can look in your eyes and tell your sincerly too
    always true
    always telling me I miss you

    Interesting, the way you always surprise me
    always saying good night to me
    always seem right for me in only 30 days

    I dont want to say goodbye to you,
    dont want to hide from you
    just want to be true with you:I think your moving too fast
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Work it out!! I'm lovin' this line ... it's too cute :lol:



    Do your thang Mr. M!!

    One :heart:

    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MR.M

    man i love how u worked dis too perfection
    the magic u pose..............:D
     
  4. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    imma tell...

    you better write, now!

    winter love~
     
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    Hey...I guess what better way to say....

    Back up.. slow down.. rewind.. stop the press!!!!! in blatent(sp?) terms as you would write it.... This is dha bomb!!!!
     
  6. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    been away

    Thanks for the read on this one....
    It's about slowing down things and taking time... It gets scary when your on page 10 and they're on the last chapter!...
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like

    the way u ribbed it up
    then broke it down so suB-t-ly.

    thanx.
    hw
     
  8. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi-wa
    Thanks... Thats poetry to me: The truth even if you dont expect it at first....
    Thank U poet...
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Marion

    Sounds like a love joynt to me dog. Too Tight!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeap!!!

    slowing ya roll and tyme out to see da beauty
    as it comes end tyme see u know da score!!
    keep it movin......lovin dis :D
     
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