Black Poetry : Salt in My Sugar

[garlicsalt99]

Nice write my friend

I once had a conversation with a chef, and he told me that a little bit a salt in something sweet brings out the flavor that much more. It takes bad things to really get us to appreciate the good. Without that contrast, we'd take things for granted. This was a nice write. I'll be back thru to read more

 

[watzinaname]

Your response was creatively on point Brother Sha'iyn, thank you so much.
I believe what that chef told you to be true. A dash of salt sweetens the pot, true. Too much can ruin the entire dish. Thank you for adding just the right amount of salt, , to this piece Brother garlicsalt.

 

[PLATINUMILLITY1]

Life Like my Oatmeal
Salty yet sweet
Ironicly I like it that way
but....Only When I eat it
Cuz....
Oatmeal is Different from Life
Oatmeal won't lie
If you need it...and you can eat it
then it's good for you too

But when it's bad, it's sad
because...It's there to ruin you
Artifically Sweet clottting my brain
Slenda a trick for the body's deframe
Salt, theres no fooling, theres no skip
but waay to much and your pressure sticks


Sweeten my meat
and you've cheated me


Spike my lemonade
and I taste shame for days


Salty yet sweet
but a disaster when salty to sweet
burning to the faults
Deadly when sweeter on salt
disease to evile
cained minerally

So you see
Oatmeal is So different from life
Life's like my oatmeal...
but only with wheat,
can I combine salt with sugar
because with everything else
Combining the two can be fatal to me

 

[watzinaname]

Enjoyed the creativity of that flowback Platinum. Too much salt in the sugar ruins the sweetness, thank you.