Black Poetry : Salt in My Sugar
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I hope there's plenty of sugar left So'ja, thanks for your response brotha.
The agony and the ecstacy at the same time can leave a bitter taste, thank you brotha Rich.
Yes, it is strange that life can be just that way, thank you 4Everluv.
The agony and the ecstacy at the same time can leave a bitter taste, thank you brotha Rich.
Yes, it is strange that life can be just that way, thank you 4Everluv.
We must ask ourselves, does "salt" have it's place in our life? ...it sure does, for if it didn't...what would we compare our "sugar" too?
As the "Cold" complements "Hot"...our bittersweet moments don't mean a whole lot.
it may appear that the "Salt" is leading the crop
but...
The "Sugar over Salt" ...will come out on top
Excellent piece poet, your style is outstanding!!
As the "Cold" complements "Hot"...our bittersweet moments don't mean a whole lot.
it may appear that the "Salt" is leading the crop
but...
The "Sugar over Salt" ...will come out on top
Excellent piece poet, your style is outstanding!!
There's bound to be some salt, but it's time to worry when the salt overpowers the sugar. Let's hope the sugar stays in abundance. Thank you kindly for your words, Sister queent, much appreciated.
grammatically powerful
your adjectives were on point.
salt maybe deemed necessary and sugar maybe the biggest drug.
keep a tight leash on your hate and be everso careful who you love.
your adjectives were on point.
salt maybe deemed necessary and sugar maybe the biggest drug.
keep a tight leash on your hate and be everso careful who you love.
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