Black Poetry : Sa'laat

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lord premiere bring it back
    soul secluded upon a track
    phat like ghetto chile isaac
    weave dreams like flax
    teas from beez
    shy7 sticky like earwax
    da rubba contest
    bendin knees an throwin punches
    hold tite
    the lost be loses lunches
    i'm on a pedestal
    where did heaven go
    can i fall
    will it be venom comin from below
    is there an ethiopia
    slow burns on my retinas
    precluded by the inductions
    radio waves thru
    glass tubes breakin down weight like
    instruction
    illuminate permeate central discussion
    behind linds fine i was still cussin
    overcomin the customs
    reroute equations
    of kemet
    aligning for symmetry
    approach roads with butta loaves
    thru hooded rows
    and thru cemetaries
    reachin for life like a cadaver
    just broke ground---da dark
    reachin for light
    is this real life
    please bless my eyesight
     
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    wow this is deep
    flow it ..release it
    feeling you on this
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    thanks for the love...finna hit up my second class. check ya'll next week

    Ras
     
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    Mummified Soul!
     
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    You on a roll... Son