Black Poetry : Sahara Sands

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Between the woven white cotton
    and the indigo of rough denim,
    an expanse of pure femininity lies,
    ripples in the dark desert sands
    smooth dunes born of the Sahara,
    a navel deep oasis, a mirage of attention
    midriff attraction in the soft sand,
    in between white cotton and denim.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

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    ra, just let me be the first to say how tyght i think this piece heyah, is. i've read it and left it and now i've come back just to let you know that it is truly tyght! keep on scribin'.
     
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    Beautiful!
     
  4. Amun-Ra

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    A woman, and the shifting sands

    The swirling sands of deep navel, attract our eyes to natures sweetness--a woman--Amun-Ra

    :heart:
     
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    Ra...........

    SUPER VISION OF SAHARA LOVE
    WIT EVERY SAND SPRAY....NICELY WRITTEN
    LOVIN IT MY BRUTHA:D
     
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    Blue Jeans Bare Midriff

    A sparkling combination. Makes you put on dark glasses--Ra
     
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    YEAH!! I KNOW

    GOT MINES ON
    DON'T WANNA GO BLIND.
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is a wonderful sight!

    I got mine on too--Ra :cool:
     
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