Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sahara Heart

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  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sahara Heart

    My life...
    Oh what a ride,
    Arid like the desert
    Harsh and viscious
    Sand storms and the scorching sun
    Have made me.

    Disastrous you might say-

    I beg to differ

    You see,
    These sand storms to me
    Are a sign that they'll be
    Calmness
    The scorching sun will bring
    Cool nights
    With more stars in the skies than I've seen
    Anywhere

    My heart
    Like the Sahara harbors many
    Feeling of love
    Compassion, joy, gratefulness

    What is life without scorn, storms and suffering?

    My life like the Sahara
    Lives....
    A memorable existence

    I am Sahara Heart.



    :) be nice with the comments guys b/c this is my very first public poem. love you all for the inspiration.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully done happy to meet da Sahara heart
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sahara, get out of my head! :) you are singing my song, and singing it so beautifully. nice work.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is nice work...
    glad you shared
     
  5. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for being so beautiful! i love all your work and you were my inspiration. God bless you as you all have been a blessing to me! much love and nuff respect.:kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise most welcomeeeeeeeeee
     
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