Black Poetry : Sadness is Found

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sadness is found


    Sadness is found
    When the man you love
    Can’t
    won’t
    love you in return
    silent tears fall , when he realizes you are not “the one”
    desperate hope springs eternal
    cause the physical
    is enough
    for him
    YOUR mental is dependent
    on HIS physical manifestation
    of YOUR
    love
    his emotional is lost
    in his carnal
    pleasures
    sadness is found
    when your forever
    is his today
    when
    your womanhood is challenged daily
    cause its not enough
    for him
    sadness is found
    in his eyes
    when he looks at you
    without love
    sadness is found
    when everything you want, dream, hope
    pray for
    is wrapped in dreams
    that never become
    reality
    sadness is found
    within the sound of a breaking heart

    Natasha
     
  2. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL, girl, I am soooo keeping an eye out for all your stuff from now on. You are brilliant.
    pleasures
    sadness is found
    when your forever
    is his today

    AND

    sadness is found
    within the sound of a breaking heart

    are my favourite lines. Great work.

    *Emma*
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks !

    Its nice when others "get it" ;)
     
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    Nice scribe here Poet!

    I likes a lot!!
    Keep the flo!
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I definitely get it! It is reminiecent cause I have experienced it in my day as well. You are magnificient with words and it opens mental corridors. Tight!
     
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    was gonna quote you on a line or two but there are just to many. great post.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely i know dis so well been in da path of dis myself......tell it all !
     
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